All Comments on 'ZMP ~ rippled waters'

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Imagery

Your vivid imagery

like your thoughts knows no bounds,

and like the ripples on the pond,

go on and on

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 19 years ago
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WOW!!! 2 ZMP poems in 1 day!! & this one is even more ZEN then the 1st 1!!!

I wish I knew you how do you do it!!!

ZMA You write right! Ha Ha a joke!!!

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
another good one.....

and this is my fave spot:

My emotions show

like the ripples that grow.

when words or thoughts,

mimic a stones throw.

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you may want to take a look at crashing though. it may not fit appropriately with ripples as it would with waves. i might not be seeing something as intended though. nicely done art......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I always

love the way you paint me into the scenes of you waters...nice one Art...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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You are growing Art. Your zen has great power and is smashing down walls of limiting mind work. I see your soul opening rippling out and touching others with the power of words..

du~

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