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LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
Very vivid

Such a lively decription. I could almost feel the sun shining down on me.

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Imagery

Good description, but I missed something more. There's a tension waiting beneath the surface of that pond, a poem.

SeattleRainSeattleRainabout 20 years agoAuthor
Lauren, you are right

There was something missing, I was holding back, you are very perceptive. I have heard you are an intelligent, talented woman. Tomorrow, check out deeper into the zodiac for another piece of the story, if you have time. Thank you for the comments-- Seattle

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