by SeattleRain
Such a lively decription. I could almost feel the sun shining down on me.
Good description, but I missed something more. There's a tension waiting beneath the surface of that pond, a poem.
There was something missing, I was holding back, you are very perceptive. I have heard you are an intelligent, talented woman. Tomorrow, check out deeper into the zodiac for another piece of the story, if you have time. Thank you for the comments-- Seattle