All Comments on '10-7: Field Sobriety Test'

That was so fucking hot! I love stories like this. It just oozes raw hot sex! Keep more comin'!

Excellent... great story and well-written... thanks for sharing...

Interesting story of circumstances leading to temptation. Look forward to reading more stories from you!

that was awesome. i love my police officers and wish more of them did like that. i have a friend whom is a trooper who would gladly do that to me but sadly he's 3000 miles away. please write more of these those.

Well written. Excellent first submission, lets have some more!

I loved it, I'm going to squirm every time I see a cop car now........and hope to be pulled over.

You should write more. I really enjoyed this one.

I loved the self effacing main character, loved your sense of humor throughout, loved the hot fucking sex. The thing is, erotica can be so boring ...you brought a real sense of characterization and a time and place to the whole thing that made it not only sexy but fun to read. I smiled... and came too.

Awesome, I loved it!!! Keep it coming!!!!

OMG I got a hard on and came reading this story. I am a cop myself and have always wanted to do this to a hot sexy girl.. you made it come true in my mind!

and quick. Don't make me beg for it.Thank you, Mam'n.

Makes me want to be arrested!!!

Marvelous story. Well crafted and well written. Great setting, appealing and complex characters, delightful sex ... there is a lot to like here.

Ah yes, but most of all, it has a genuine plot with deeper meanings, conflict, and an underlying poignancy that touches the heart and soul as well as the hormones.

I'd like to see additional sequels, but I am not necessarily leaning towards having them end up together. Too pat. This story and its sequel are brimming with inner turmoil and rich with subtle drama that have nothing to do with sex or adultery and everything to to with need and love.

This story and the sequel are why I read erotica and why I am willing to slog through, skim through and discard most of the mindless fuck tales ... because sometimes I do find magical gems like these.

I thought it could have been better. You should add more to it. It goes to the point too fast and it's not very descriptive. Also, it's super short and fast. Not very interesting.

I thought the story was well written. It is short, but the encounter is short on time. I wish she weren't married and cheating, but I love the whole tough cop thing. I would love to see this story move forward. Write more!!

I would have probably given you a four for this if you had written your femme fatale to be just dating a guy but still single. But since she's a married woman cheating on her husband this automatically gets a 1/5.