by Emmeran
Keep up the excellent work. Nice story development. I was hoping for more from the Sheriff, but that must be in later chapters. -- Seeker
Excellent. Great story. A bit confusing at times, ie giving snippets of info on Sherif & wife & giving the impression that the story has been told?. I actually went back through the last few pages to make sure I had not missed it....
Anyhow keep up the good work.
Cheers,
John
Zach can only relate things he knows at that point in time, he often has short conversations but we only delve deeper when time allows; such as riding together on the road or sitting around in the evening. I'm looking for a tool that will let me build and post the full bio (as much as Zach knows) and those will be available on Patreon for the same buck a month they force me to charge. I also blog about things over there and post my research, chapters are published daily.
So as Zach learns more so will you, keep in mind that Matilda doesn't talk to Zach outside of telling him what to do and I doubt we'll ever learn more about her background. Frankly, I'm not sure I want to know more about Matilda.