by JamaisYariver
Interesting premise.
But the actual sex (not the sex being read from the blog) was lacking.
No real description of exactly what she was doing to him? No teasing him with her tits? No teasing him with her ass? Her mouth? Her tongue?
No describing how hot/wet all the edging/milking was making her? No asking him if he could smell her? Was he ready to make her cum with his mouth yet?
Three stars.