by monkeytail10103
This author is nothing but a cock loving cuck. He loves to write this trash. Second story of his I've read and the last. This fucker needs to find another hobby
I really messed up at a party that I Sally was at by myself. My husband Bill was called into work not to long before we were going to leave.I said Bill I'll just stay home and wait and if you are done soon enough we can go later. Bill said that he could drop me off at the party on his way to work and when he was finished he would come. I said ok. He texted me twice to let me know how things were going. I was having a good time really to good. There were several guys flirting with me and supplying me with drinks. I should have known better but the alcohol was getting to me before I was able to control myself correctly. One younger guy was hitting on me and I did tell him to backoff. In the pool I was talking to a Beth when the young guy swam up to me under the water and grabbed a hold of my breast and kissed me. I didn't even know that Bill was at the party. But he had jumped into the pool and grabbed the young guy and started beating on him. Two other men were in the pool stopping Bill from hitting the dumbass. Bill stopped and got out of the pool and was walking away. The husband of the host couple told the young guy to leave. I jumped out of the pool running to catch up with Bill. He was quiet for day's. I apologized several times. The children knew that things weren't right. After some of our friends talked to Bill and said that I hadn't really done anything wrong only maby drinking too much it was the guy that was out of line. Thank goodness for our friend's for talking to him. We are back to normal.
Just came across this trash. First story I've read by this author and will be the last
No cock is 9 inches unless it is on a horse. Even 7 inches is only one in a hundred. Therefore, instead of 5 stars, I gave it a lower rating.
I kept hoping he would be a man, but no.. he was a cunt. On the other hand, she was already a cunt. Happy anniversary. I need to throw up.
Once she starts sucking again, it is time to go to your room, pack, take her purse, and leave.
Consult any 5 Loving Wives stories for the Burn Checklist.
The author manages to convey the hurt well, but not why he let's it happen.
I liked Chuckles' answer best. I'll take option number 4 Monty. I think I would have left the pool area long before listening that a-hole too much longer.
Such a load of crap. Just horrible writing and a horrible unbelievable story. Can not believe these cucks actually think thus is worth reading.
"I'll give you three choices..."
"Three choices, eh? Let's add a fourth."
"What's that?"
"Choice #4 is yours. If you don't get out of that tub, walk away, and leave my wife alone for the rest of our time here - and ever - I'm going to go over to your friend there - Kyle, isn't it? And tell him that you've been fucking his mom. And I'm going to suggest that we tag-team you. One of us holds you down while the other beats the shit out of you. I'm sure someone will medevac what's left of you home. Be clear on something, kid. You may be younger, you may even have a magic dick. But I'm older, and I've got a decade of being devious on you. I _will_ find you when you're unable to resist, and I _will_ send you home with every bone and your dick broken and in a cast. And you can continue fucking my wife after you heal, after I divorce her."
I poured the drinks on my wife's head. "Coming, dear?"
Poorly developed CUCK of a story. I marvel at the imagination of CUCK writers who are so lazy that the story is predicated on a loud mouth with a big dick. No finesse, seduction hell not even a trace of character development. What a load of crap.
Nice short LW story. After over hearing how the young stud banged his friends mother, then seeing his big cock and at the same time realizing her hubby has an inadequate little dick, all the ingredients are there for her to have a life changing experience on vacation. Can’t wait to read the next chapter..
What was that? This isn't even a fully developed story. I don't understand these husbands, I'd never put up with this mildly. I might get beat up, but I sure wouldn't sit on sidelines and let it happen.
What a piece of shit the husband is. He should just go back to the room, pack up and leave. Let the cunt stay with the asshole. Go home, change the locks and get the divorce filed.
WACC … -5. Time to dump the slut. Hit with the Martian slut ray no doubt. Hey it’s spring break… so were are the wild college girls? Time for hubby to pick them up and fuck ‘em…. After all he’s got something Tommy doesn’t. $$$$ Takes a whole lot of spending money.
Hubby should have kicked him in the face. Then yanked him out the tub, kicked him in the balls. Then thrown the drinks in his slut wife’s face, taken her bikini, gone to the room backed and tossed her clothes in a garbage can, along with purse. Left her with no money, clothes or ID. Called his attorney and said file the papers. BTB…
Nope. Read it til the hot tub. If hubby had grabbed loud guy by the hair and ear and pulled him out of the hot tub I would have continued.
Great story. Definitely a 5. Forget the naysayers. They would not read stories like this if it wasn't a fantasy of theirs also. My wife could be your wife's younger sister. Similar bodies. Although my wife is 10 years younger with a 34b cup. We also have been married 10 years. I would like to see her suck a young dudes cock like that. That would be so hot. It would have to happen in a more private setting though because of our work. Anyway a great read and keep the stories coming.
I loved this story. Got quickly to the point. Would like to see some more reactions from the husband. I think future episodes will explain why the wife was so quick to drop her bottoms.
Hahahahahah #blueanon in the comments of LE. What a world.
BTW, willing bcucking violates human sexual evolution, hence the taboo. Wouldn't want to deny science, now would we?
If you are wondering why your stories were 1-bombed, there is one religious retard making multiple Anonymous visits along with fake bios under the handles
26thNC, Harry inVA, thecarolinadreamer, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, Impo_64, also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Pattellie among others,
in order to 1-bomb good stories that express sexuality without cutting the nuts off all the offenders.
You will find repetitive comments from this person - "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag" etc.
By the way, this person is a Trumpite from the deep South running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world. They prove a good reason to get out and vote against all the MTG's.
And also note, this person also was cucked or never had sex with a woman in the first place and that is why they target this section to express their anger at women.
1 star I hate Cluck stories . I would have kicked her sorry ass to the curb
I thought this one would be another February Sucks until I realized it was months old and had only garnered hate mail from most. I hate this woman, which is what Feb Sucks did, and that makes it great writing. I was motivated to write my own ending since this one did not have any. It would not have ended up well for either of the lovers. But it is history. I am following the writer.
Another cuck wanna be. You deserve to lose her, maybe you should suck his dick too. Sad so many males aren’t anymore
I'll write it for you in a single paragraph. After wifey and loud mouth finished, I headed back to our room, packed my bags and left for the airport. I shut off my phone and booked the earliest flight home. Once there I dropped everything and headed for my attorney's office to file for divorce.
Looks like wifey has become a victim of new world math: 9 inches > 10 years.
I had a friend of mine that used to fuck my wife often,one night he suggested we all go to a friends house for a swim in there Indore pool.After being in the pool for about an hour two more of his friends turned up. Some time later one of his friends came onto my wife, and finished up fucking my wife in the pool in front of everyone of course after getting my approval by nodding my head.That finished up being a great night had by all.
No way on earth this drivel scored 3.87 unless marks were doctored.
JJ
I had to read this total shite.....ffs who writes this crap
You peopme must be incredibly stupid or deprived of basic human sense to think something like this would be erotic or stimulating though I've no doubt there ate fools out there that would do this. This is nothing but a degrading story thrown at the male .any true man would have beaten the young lad to.an inch of his life. Any real wife would have left the hot tub and for you stupid morons out there..size does NOT generally turn a woman on nor does it enchant or put them in a stupor.
I feel bad for those who cant decipher reality from fiction
With an unbelievable wife, used as a prop for his humiliation. Poor idea.
I would have to say, " she is my soon to be ex wife, so knock yourself out. "
....and it’s time for hubby to go find himself a girl without a checkered past.
Going to her room... hmmm. I’m surprised she didn’t want to go to his room and take on all the college boyz.
Well, anyway, hubby should go back there, just long enough to get his wallet and keys and slip out as wifey gets busy with her new toy.
Then he can drive home, get his shit together, drain the accounts and move on.
He needn’t worry about wifey. She’ll party on until Spring Break is over and all the kiddies go home, but she’ll get the house in the end, so no big.....
It’s just better this way. No self respecting man wants a whore or a slut for a wife. It’s unhealthy, risky......and just plain shitty.
Have you ever thought of writing something original? It’s harder, but much more worthwhile. Rehashing this cuckold shit has been so overdone, it’s a bad joke in last months newspaper (which nobody reads anymore, anyway).
The writing is good. The temptation of a faithful wife and the resulting emotions are a proven hook on this site. However, this is simply not how real women behave. We men have been misled to believe that simply waving a big dick will have them falling all over themselves wanting to bang us. Just doesn't happen that way in real life. The vast majority of women need a better reason than that.
So full of themselves with so much to prove. Love it when they prove it with me. Xoxoxo Annette
Yes, he's a wimp, but if that whip all of a sudden grew some balls and made her pay, you'd be the first one crying a river how cruel he is. You guys are hypocrites.
Ok..just give me a few minutes to get my stuff from the room and I'll get home to start the divorce. Don't
First 9999 out of 10000 guys would of gone down swinging, win or lose. Divorce definitely after she sucked his cock. Hope we hear more about fucking his friend mother. I know only one guy at around 22 that was married and allowed his wife get picked up in a bar. She fucked some college guy who got drafted that day . A 6'4" 294 pound black DE. The guy gucked her all night in his hotel room in the ass and all . He walked out , couldn't watch anymore. That morning before she got home her threw all her stuff out of their apt window. Cleaned the bank accounts out and had her served a few days later. She begged forgiveness but he couldn't forgive. Also the mom getting fucked is not so rare but very hot
If he wasn't such a wimp, he ought to have said to his wife come out with me now or don't bother coming home, if you do divorce papers will be waiting for your signature. I'll be leaving on the next plane.
I agree with the other comments, if the wife is willing to do that with the younger guy, than more power to her!! Hubby seems a wimp anyway.
What about this shit is supposed to be erotic, yuck.
I guess she doesn't much appreciate his FAT WALLET enough.
Grab the plane tickets, check out & fly home. Let lover boy take care of her.
THE HUSBAN HAS NO BALLS HE SHOULD KICK THAT MOTHER IN HIS BIG BALLSSEND HIM INTO THE HOT TUB AND DROWN HIS ASS ALONG WITH THE SLUT WIFE AND MAKE SHORETHAT THEY BOTH DIE FUCK THAT SCUM BAG BITCH AND THAT BIG DICK WHORE.
What can you expect 5" and slim against 9" and fat, no contest.
It certainly isnt for my wife.
I also note that she didnt suck hubby off too often and never swallowed, and she expects her husband to beleive she hasnt had a big cock before.... Ha fucking ha!
in honor of that whore of Lit bonnietaylor2, better known as bonny/vasty/anon, winner of the 2015 Asshole of the Year Award
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Fuck you in the heart dear annony! You old ugly fat ED fag!!
In some's world this might be entertaining and titalating, but not mine. Today might have been the "10 th." Wedding anniversary, but after this "little show"; she wouldn't have to worry about an 11 th. No, let her have her "BIG COCK" asshole take care of her. I would pack my bags, get on the first flight home after cleaning out her cash, grabbing her cell phone, and taking her ID and credit cards with me and cancelling her return voucher home for her ticket. While I was waiting, I would call my attorney and set up a consult as soon as possible on my return to get the ball rolling on the divorce. For me, everything has a cost; and the cost of her actions would be painful, thorough, expensive, and complete; by the time I got done costing her everything she held near and dear. A sickening tale about a cold and selfish person, in case you wondered, this hit way too close to home for me.
hey hubby! ya just gonna stand there ??? least ya could do is kick her out, go home with out her and throw her stuff out on the lawn and divorce her or at least leave her- ya get a 2
Total crap. No loving wife here. just kill yourself and make the world a better place!
Getting rather tired of the big cock stories. It is a tired cliche' at best. As a sex therapist and a male slut myself I have met a few size queens. I have known more women who hated too much size. Depending on the woman it could be fairly smile and a tilted cervix. The most important sex organ is the brain. If a woman thinks a big one will make her love it more so it does. And mostly the opposite too. So in this story that the woman throws over years of marriage for a fuck with a big dick is just bad writing. Then to make the big dick contemptuous of others making him worthy of contempt so as to make her new choices even more incompatible with the background for her. quick fucks happen but not this way. A 2
Does your mother know your telling stories about her?
What a really bad story...alas, there is no zero star.
To those of you who read the entire thing (despite having a pretty good idea what the subject matter was), I have only one thing to say... you're a waste of a human being. I mean, how pathetic can you be to waste your OWN time reading something you can't stand and THEN spend even MORE time writing a negative comment. I know this isn't your typical Backwoods Sex with Mama category, so sorry you got lost... but you may want to grab the can of Bud, hop in your jacked up pickup and go crash into a pole.
Save the planet. Spare humanity your life.
Fucking idiots. lol
Great story. Well told. Keep it coming.
Yuck another shit writer that caters to the unwashed. ONE star.
Sorry, there was nothing erotic about this story. Nobody, but nobody can be as stupid as the characters you described. Come on, willing cuckolds are not erotic. Only the scum of the earth that troll these stories would think so.
That was a very hot story I would love to see my wife get fucked like that any chance you would be interested In meeting my wife and fuck her like the women in this story if so here's our email orgasmdonar247@gmail.com
That fucking idiot would get his due and her ass would be so screwed.
I wish you had put more build up on the front of it. It seems like Jill was just ready to jump on young stud's cock. No inner conflict within her? That would have made it better. And I always like the drawing attention to the wedding rings in these types of stories. Not really fan of cuckold stories, but I enjoyed this one.
Good spelling, but poor punctuation, especially using commas where they are needed.
5 *'s and looking forward to where this is going. Since young stud is going to college in their home town, this could continue on past the anniversary.
Where have all the good writers gone? This category is becoming the dumping ground for trash writers. How about an erotic story next time, if you're capable of writing one.
Gave it a ONE in honor of that lesbian bonnietaylor2. Have you had your fur burger for today yet?
Until it went crazy. Ya really think she would deep throat a monster cock, especially after already havinf drained the drunk? Then u think he'd be able to screw her? Superman, huh?
2
I must agree with the majority of comments of a poorly written thought out story.
After reluctantly reading this story I felt disappointed to find that this is another cuckold story in the mix. I am like many men here and wouldn't put up with the kid's behavior or that of the wife. She would be divorced and left behind with no place to go. Oh here's a thought she could shack up at the kid's dorm and have more cocks to suck and fuck and be a total slut.
We need a lot more stories like this in the LW category. It sure beats the hell out of those boring 5 or more page novels that we see far too much of. I can hardly wait for the next chapter when she gets fucked by her first nine inch cock and hubby loves watching and hopefully participating. But please, no cream pie or cock sucking by the husband in the next chapter...just a husband sharing his wife please.
What a great anniversary present. Love young super sized cock. xoxoxox Annette
I threw the drink in my wife's face.
Go ahead fuck her punk. I left back to the room, came back with my knife and castrated him on the spot. It was a bloody mess, but hey it's just a story... I handed my wife his balls and the knife said keep them dear but don't come home.
After looking at your other stories, I have ZERO hope that you will give this husband a set of balls, so I'm going to save time by giving this the 1 star that is far more than it deserves. I with there was a zero or negative rating we could give!
And I agree, cuckold should be in Fetish!
I was going to give this the 1 star I usually give cuck stories, but since this is labelled chapter 1, I'll give it the benefit of the doubt till I see what happens in later chapters.
That said, I have several comments:
Despite her mouthed "Sorry", at implying this is a first, I don't believe that she hasn't already been cheating on him. You don't go from ten year faithful wife to cock-sucking size queen overnight!
Giving her the benefit of the doubt for the moment, HIS actions baffle me:
First, there is NO way I would have left them alone a second time. If they weren't going back to their room, I would have sent HER for the next round, an while she was gone, tell Tommy boy that it was time to join his friends and find a playmate his own age.
Second, when he DID go for drinks and came back to find them both with their pants off, if he wanted to stay with her he should have told her to put some clothes on and come back to the room with him. If she didn't I would have gone back to the room, packed them BOTH up, dump her stuff in a dumpster, check the BOTH out and headed to the airport. Then I would have cancelled her ticket and changed mine to the earliest flight I could get. Either then, if I had time, or when I got home I'd cancel all cards that I could, change the locks and throw out all her stuff (selling anything, like jewelry with any value), and make an appointment with a lawyer!
I CERTAINLY wouldn't have stood there while she sucked him off, smiled while she ran her hands over his body, and announced that she was taking him back to her (OUR!) room without even looking at me!
Tired of reading this kind of craps making the husband into a wimp. I think by the other reviews everyone is saying the same thing. This a story i wish i never would of read. Just way to much shit about a big Dick. My wife told me its exciting at first but when compassion and caring come in all it is a big dick and you get nothing what a woman really craves in a true relationship. Mr college boy in real life would get the shit beat out of him with a married woman. Sorry author 99 percent of men are not wimps and there would be he'll to pay if that was my wife.
Why he didn't just leave when he came back is beyond me...
Either that or beat the shit out of the guy...
As @tazz317 says: there won't be a 11th anniversary!!! A bad story, with characters changing their way 180º...This woman doesn't have only a thought to her children, to her family...This is part 1, so I hope the husband sees this marriage is over, get back home immediately and start the divorce the next day...1*
How can you redeem this story without making the husband into a wimp.....he allows the wife to leave with another and she goes not only willingly, but with great anticipation....no marriage here, no love for the husband, only lust and disrespect! Unless you plan some significant consequences for this ultimate betrayal then this story just becomes another one of the cuckold fetish stories which seem to dominate Loving Wifes lately. I know, it is your story, you can do what you want, we don't have to read it, but unfortunately, we have already read it and it is stuck in our minds. Need a mind wipe unless you can somehow redeem it in chapter 2.
then again a man would not do it, only a little boy would. 1*
Ten-year wedding anniversary, and now heading for divorce lawyer....!
First the loud mouth asshole, then the cunt that calls herself a wife and finally the dipshit that wrote it.