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Great story, very inventive.

An unusual story that makes one think.

A different story. I liked the read. Some spelling/grammar issues kept it from getting 100. A good job, still. Thanks.

Very deep, makes you think. I even skipped the sex scenes just to find out "what will happen next"

I liked it. It was a nice refresh from all the other "regular" stories. One problem I found was almost all the characters in the story react too harshly. For example, when Mike looks at the reports Jerry hands in, he flips out like crazy! Chill out, Mike! Besides that, it was a good story :)

Just wanted to say it was a really interesting story. I just wish it were longer and you had given some more explanations. Any plans to write a sequel?

I couldn't read it fast enough. Never did expect a story as thought provoking as this. I am going to read more of your writings. The sex was just enough and real to everyday life. I also found the get to the point" extremely refreshing. Great work!!!

Very very readable! Awesome :)