All Comments on '12 Cams, 3 Teens 2 Milfs & 1 Wife Ch. 01: The Move'

It was a pretty good start. Not really incest yet but sets a good premise

I am climbing on to ride off and say thank you as well.

Fun read. Looking forward to where this could go.

Thanks for sharing.

A sincere thank you for stating your intentions re: chapters. It sure beats trying to guess sometimes. I look forward to the read.

I have enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to the chapter!!

You got 6 more chapters, don't stall!

I liked it. No incest to start just some voyeurism ( even if it is his daughter). Hope you get to the sex in the next chapter.

Enjoying the setup and character development. Looking forward to where you take this.

Time to review for piddling with the nit-pickers for grammar and stuff. Character setup is excellent. Nothing deep, but leaving the readers room to help with their development (no pun). Thus far, I’ll call you Chef. You’re doing a hellacious job on the lead up, specially the peeping Tina.

Lee

Great start seems like you know your way through a story. I’m excited to read the rest.