All Comments on '14 Hours Pt. 06'

So he is a Chippindale.

I wanted to read a mystery and since there was isn't a category for a new I decided after reading A God named Bruce and that I should look in the humor we section for something funny. You write a good yarn. And this is pretty funny. So what if the sex scenes are lacking I came here for humor with a bit of a romp. Keep it up.

I have to say I'm really enjoying your magical mystery tour, as a story it's top notch. Not sure if it really belongs in the humour section although it does have a nice gentle whimsical feel to it. Nor is it really a sex story, more a story with a bit of an erotic edge and brief scattered sex scenes. A sexual mystery. Not that that matters at all. The bottom line is it's an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!