All Comments on '14 Months 05: New Year'

Wow, action packed. Proof positive that it doesn’t all need to be about sex, this is a great story.

The only thing that didn’t make any sense to me though was the comment towards the end about Mimi;

"If you don't complete the required dances, you will be disqualified and out of the challenge and Mimi will stay in by default.“

How could she be allowed to stay in the contest after attempted manslaughter on one of the men in the competition? (I think you call it 2nd degree murder in the US, because it wasn’t premeditated?)

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and looking forward to reading more 😉

Regards, Tess (UK)

I love this story. You’re an amazing writer.

Agree with Tess though. The bit about Mimi staying in didn’t make sense. If neither dance the final set ( and Mimi hasn’t danced at all ) , how come Sophie gets disqualified and Mimi doesn’t ?

Love, Love, Love this story !!! Can’t hardly stand having to wait for the next installment.

I'm addicted to this story. Great characters and story line. Keep up the good work.

The end where Zander is talking about Mimi staying - it was meant more like an empty threat to jolt her back into the game. I apologise if that was confusing for readers. The same with the following sentence about sending her back where she came from, it just wouldn't happen at this stage! I hope that helps.

I'm struggling to find writing time at the moment but I am hoping to keep up with the weekly publishing schedule I have set for myself and that people continue to enjoy reading this series.

Please don't stop writing I am fully invested in all of these characters! I almost regret reading so soon and not just waiting to binge read the whole series. Was not prepared for what went down with Darius and Mimi though holy crap

Please keep up with your writing schedule this story is one of the best I’ve read for a good long while , nice decent sized chapters, lots of detail and A good development over the time schedule ... really really good thank you. And still much needing answers which in the real world would take time and you are spanning over a length of time , I’m impressed Read you soon xx

Seriously...The best read on Lit! The only drawback is having to wait while craving more. You've got some amazing talent!

holy crap! i can't stop reading! the plot twists are exquisite...

My god, guy, a "super lover" that could never exist and a Benevolent Rapist is about as likely as a benevolent dictator both an oxymoron at best I have been desperate in my life but I have never sold my soul or body for a better life. Like you have these women in your "Stories"