All Comments on '15 Days of Captivity'

by HottieKatie

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

Noncon at its' truest. You did a good job being concise and intense with no pretense at HEA.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
want to read more

I loved the style of your writing But I did not understand well who is she and who are they .The ending was horrifying bur realistic .Grate job

arsekoarsekoover 10 years ago
Last chance

A chilling story and by staying in the 50 words or less per entry, have made it hard on yourself to encompass the entirety of that chapter's elements.

Well done. A moving and most non erotic story.

Chilling and tender all at once. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really well doneā€¦

True. Real. Excellent. Sad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A somber story.

I was touched with sadness for her, wishing I could have helped. At her passing I was left both empty and angry. Amazing how you managed to convey such emotion with 50 word shots.

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