All Comments on '1969 - Ch. 03'

Once again, this is just so much fun to read. If it ends here it's a brilliant story. If there's more to come I'll hardly be able to contain my joy. Great storytelling!

One again I agree with Tatanka Bill. This was so well done. In these three short chapters we have come to know, understand, and yes, to empathize with, have contempt for, or even to downright hate the several characters. As for me, I'm totally on Pauline's side! I guess that's what's expected, even if she does not have the highest morals, she does what she needs to do to survive, and she has more humanity than anyone else in the story, although I guess Mr. Harrington Brown represents another aspect of humankind. It would be fun to learn more of HB's number 2. What happens with Mr. Cox and Pauline? And the judge? And what happens with the verdict? How does Harrington Brown handle defeat, if in fact he loses? Did Spratt have a boy or a girl? So many questions! I look forward to learning the answers! It's also amusing that this days of an ordinary life story is taking place during one of the great triumphs of the age: the Moon Landing! Thanks for another great chapter, JB