All Comments on '1969: Righteous'

by VintageChiffon

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Only_connectOnly_connectabout 3 years ago

Wow! Daring, expressive, powerful and effective.

Good writing!

NeverlanderNeverlanderabout 3 years ago
Ready for the Second Coming!

Now that's what I call a Rapture! Her next confession is bound to be an extended edging for the poor priest - heavy cream is likely to replace wine in the next Sacrament. And such deeply felt worship for her helplessly bound Lord and Masturbation Encouragement, and that damned strategically placed rag, you can almost see, almost...!

Things I especially liked: "joke that only impresses other fathers"; "tied her hair up with her panties"; "come-hithering herself"; "Ah, men"

A heavy cross is hard to bear,

A pair's a prayer when one is bare!

Yes, Ms. Chiffon, you're going to Hell, but at least we'll be together.

CarlosLoffCarlosLoffover 2 years ago

Sinfully honest and exciting, made my hot...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So wrong but Im so wet

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I'm an amateur writer of erotic short stories and poetry. My works frequently involve my passion for history, LGBT+ characters/romance/sex, and unusual exploits with nonhuman entities.