All Comments on '1973'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Huh?

You may have thought having two "Patricias" was clever and poetic, but it caused me to stop reading after the third paragraph. Or was that the second bourbon, LOL

Good luck and keep writing!

jdf1959jdf1959over 14 years ago
Interesting

I really liked this. Something a bit different but with a real life element of eroticism. Not just how fantastic a body or sex is...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
catalina

hi catalina

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
catalina and me

hello darling

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