All Comments on '1st Time Dom'

that is a hot story about a start of a Dom/sub relationship. It shows me that this can happen out of the blue, but need the right place and time and also 2 partners who want the same from different points.

5 stars from me!

but if you do a 2nd chapter he should definitely fuck her ass, dump a load of sperm in her ass, and have her do ass-to-mouth, also exhibitionism - she wears see-through clothing with no underwear, when they are out in public.

I really liked your story. It was very exciting but you really need to do a better job of proofreading before you submit.

That was very good, 13Irish13, and thank you for sharing it with us. Welcome to Literotica and I hope you will write much more for us. Five stars.

Great, wouldn't change a thing!!

More! Where is the next one? I love your writing style.

Great story! Very erotic! I hope you keep writing, preferably a sequel to this.