All Comments on '24 Hours'

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pubelesspubelessover 8 years ago
great start

Loved the story, it could be the start of a co thinking story where each dominate the other. He wins she has to shave on camera, she wins his arse is no longer virgin.

olsaltyolsaltyabout 7 years ago
NIce Pacing, Good-- from her viewpoint

I'd have liked some more requirements in public --seemed like he let her off pretty easy...The home scene was believable and nicely paced to its ..er..climax.

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