All Comments on '24 Hours a Slave Ch. 01'

On the short side to feel the waters. I would really like to read the continuation of the story. 4* from me.

It's in the right section of lit because of the reluctance. But the tags non-con and noncon are misleading.

Interesting start! I am very curious to see where you go with these two!

... too short ;-). Hope future chapters do remedy that.

Thanks and all the best

awfully short