All Comments on '27 Hours'

Thank you, it was so good that you didn’t fuck her sister (yet) please write more and include a full threesome

well done sir. not many on the taboo section are capable of actualy writting a decent story.

you brought some realism and emotion and i realy like that.

a bit transparant at times perhaps but not much you can do about that i gues.

could do with folow ups, just dont go adding more and more family members in the mix if you wirte next chapters.

well done.

Well done story. Amazing way it plays out and the fantasy of those who admit that they would go down this path. Keep up the good work.

5 Stars!

We are so lucky in Australia we can legally marry a cousin or an Aunt. The risks these days are only very slightly higher than an unrelated couple. Some countries do have really stupid rules about this. I thought halfway through this story it was all going to crash. Happy that it hasn't but please write more of this hot tale. I would love to read how this relationship progresses.

This is wonderfully put together! I hope you're going to continue this and lets us see where it goes! Thank you!

Looking forward to another instalment!

How far apart are his and her campuses?

Maybe a different apartment with a larger master bedroom with a king sized bed?

Who knows what the heck will happen? Only the Author knows. Hi

***** *****. *****

So hot and well written. Keep this up and keep it this hot!!

Four pages can be too short or too long, depending on where're going to: you packed these pages in a perfect way while also teasing with a sequel that, while much appreciated, if not written would still leave an awesome story on its own.

Engaging writing. Thanks.

Just wanted to say that I love your stories. They have the perfect mix of a story and erotica. Can't wait to read whatever comes next!! Stumbled across this one and spent the day reading everything else you posted.

unknown to each other. TK U MLJ LV NV

And the best news of all (at least for our lovers, Marie & Chris) is that first cousin marriage is legal in many US states, including MA & TX. Not so much in PA though.

It's a real pleasure to read an upbeat family love story like this, thanks!

Hoping to hear how they deal the issues of love, marriage, family and the law.

You just need to improve the writing a bit. Your tense is jumping between past and present making it hard to follow everything. Stick to past tense.

Good candidate for a series

When I first started reading this story I thought Chris,Susan,and Marie were siblings that grew up seperately,but then up to the point where Chris finds out its his Mothers Brothers kids it suprised me,thinking they were his sisters but instead are his first cousins.

But after finding out I thought it was fine because genetically first cousins are only halfblood related,so chances of abnormalities is only half as likely compared to fullblood relatives such as brothers and sisters.So for Chris,Susan,and Marie it shouldn't matter if they want to be together even if later they want to have children,which they may not want.

Also if say Chris and Marie wanted to get Married in most places I think it is legal to marry your first cousins as long as your over 18.Also this story was beautiful and touching for cousins to find each other and be reunited after so long and find love.

Finally I like one of the posters comment that this should be an on-going series and have the cousins slowly reveal their relationships to their families and eventually move in together to be a threesome couple,and have Chris marry Marie,but also have Susan silently marry her sister and cousin during the wedding and all 3 have matching wedding bands to show their love for one another.That is all.

If i could give more stars i would want more keep it cumming.

Please write more on this story line. A whole series would be great 👍🏼

It's been 12 months since this was published, so I doubt if you will write a part 2 after all this time - which is a shame as this is a great story line.

Rapief

I hope the story that you mentioned you're working on is a new chapter for this one. Very interesting and look forward to more of your works

It was good. This is the second of yours I have read. I figured since it was an older story I could see how you developed. I'd say you were good here too. Just enough twists to make it interesting.

I like having Susan knowing first .

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Damn, this was hot!

Fuck you. I’m about ready tell this girl I love you but I will let her sister suck me off every fucking morning. I just lay their and fucking smile about it as this great feeling rush up me and I cum every where. FUCK YOU. So tired of losers with no will power. I’ve had my sister wake me riding me and her friend lay beside me rubbing her body on me. Didn’t lay their like some weak willed bastard. I rolled her off of me and told them no. She was step-sister so it wasn’t incest is wrong kind of thing. You like someone then respect them.

Find myself even more in love with this girl but I was sure fucking disappointed when I woke and her sister wasn’t sucking my cock. Are you stupid? Don’t write love stories about assholes.

... of another chapter!

Please.

I understand their doubts, but Chris and Mary can be together. It's legal. And Susan would be a nice addition. ;)

I don't know why, but there is an opinion that incest with paired relatives is allowed.

Straight brother/sister is a negative.

Second cousins are positives.

Third cousins are a negative.

Marrying cousins is legal in Australia too. I enjoyed this story for the second time and have to ask why have you not continued with it? So much more to explore and have fun with yet. Will they stay together and maybe with family blessing and go on to make babies.

It became a 3⭐️ story as soon as the other sister became involved more than watching at the end

21 days later instead of 27, @01Timber67 why complain? I would have wanted more in a part 2...

Read See You In The Morning and this one - this author really doesn't like leaving gaps for the reader. One long story with gap potentials that aren't taken up; the stories have been alright but I have things to do and nowhere to take a natural break.

That was a great story and I really enjoyed it.

That was a great story and very well told!!

Good story, well told. Would have been better if Susan hadn't given him the blows, but was just watching him in the mornings. Showing interest, but not getting involved since he was Marie's. At least until she was invited. Now they're guilty of cheating on her from the beginning and both total assholes.

Why do so many authors leave good story’s on cliffhangers

Cousin incest is the only incest allowed in the Bible, if you don’t count Adam and Eve’s progeny. New Jersey and New York allow incest between consenting adults. I don’t know about Pennsylvania. As a teen, I crushed on 2 of my cousins and would have fucked them in a heartbeat had I been able. Just before heading overseas in the 80’s, one of my younger cousins tried to seduce me but I couldn’t do that to my (now ex-)wife. We remain close to this day.

This story definitely needs a sequel! 🍆🍆🐣

(12/22/2023) I've always thought that relationships between cousins were no big deal. Maybe a bit awkward, but no big deal. But Oh My! You made it so hot and dramatic. I felt for Marie and Chris. In this fantasy, I hope Marie forgives Susan, and Chris when she finds out how far they went. Excellent work!

Badly written, in the wrong 'tense'!

Susan is a bitch and what she did was awful towards her sister and Chris is an asshole while he just lays there and enjoys it while the woman he supposedly loves is out of the room. Jesus, nothing about this was love