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"27 Hours (Hopefully: Ch. 01):" Nineteen Year Old Virile Cousin, Chris Williams and Twenty-two Year Old Sex-addicted College Senior Cousin and Susan's Sister, Marie and Twenty-seven Year Old Master's Student and Marie's Sister, Susan.

Before my wife and I married--during our two and half years dating and engagement, we decided we wanted three children. My wife had one sister, but she would really been very happy to have had a brother also...three total. In my family, there were five children and one miscarriage...six total. We decided on three children for us. Ten months after my wife and I married, our son was born, very much normal. Roughly, fifteen months after our son's birth, my wife got pregnant for the second time. She had a miscarriage just after four months pregnancy. We were "batting" five hundred percent (500 %)--which is a great batting average...in baseball. Her OB/GYN said there was NO reason to not try again--he said God (nature) decided our miscarriage was necessary--for any numbers of reasons that could not be determined. Our doctors could find no reason for my wife to not get pregnant again, if we wanted. We thought long and hard--and Prayed-- about a third pregnancy; about six or so months later she was pregnant again. Almost five months later we suffered another (third pregnancy), second miscarriage)! Now, we were ONLY "batting" three hundred thirty-three percent (333 %) terrible percentage for making babies!!! We really wanted another child. The doctors were sure there was nothing physically wrong with my wife nor I, and that we should try again if we really wanted another child; we decided one more time. Our second child, our daughter--perfect in ever aspect for a newborn--was born almost five years after our son was born. Two live births and two miscarriages...but we settled for two children, a son and a daughter, and we were back up to "batting" five hundred percent (500%)!

I apologize for the long-winded oratory, but my point is warranted and distinctive. Non-related, non-incestuous couples have equally worse results than those of related (incest) parents in perfect health. My wife and I belief is that mental attitudes, the to-be-mother's care for herself (and fetus), and belief (Prayer, if so inclined) and hope play a big role/part, along with positive attitudes, to form good possibilities and foundations for successful incestuous--or not--babies ad pregnancies for any incestuous couple! Great story,with a very unusual, unique theme and plot. The dialogue is certainly stimulating, invigorating, pleasant tender and loving; the character's roles are generous, engrossing, very hopeful and to this reader, much love between the three main characters--Chris, Marie and Susan!!!!!

Today being 03 May 2024, I agree with the last paragraph of 'RodimusMike' ("over 4 years ago") above as to the future of Chris, Marie and Susan's familial status. With...each lady having three children each!!!

Susan is a bitch and what she did was awful towards her sister and Chris is an asshole while he just lays there and enjoys it while the woman he supposedly loves is out of the room. Jesus, nothing about this was love

Badly written, in the wrong 'tense'!

(12/22/2023) I've always thought that relationships between cousins were no big deal. Maybe a bit awkward, but no big deal. But Oh My! You made it so hot and dramatic. I felt for Marie and Chris. In this fantasy, I hope Marie forgives Susan, and Chris when she finds out how far they went. Excellent work!

Cousin incest is the only incest allowed in the Bible, if you don’t count Adam and Eve’s progeny. New Jersey and New York allow incest between consenting adults. I don’t know about Pennsylvania. As a teen, I crushed on 2 of my cousins and would have fucked them in a heartbeat had I been able. Just before heading overseas in the 80’s, one of my younger cousins tried to seduce me but I couldn’t do that to my (now ex-)wife. We remain close to this day.

This story definitely needs a sequel! 🍆🍆🐣

Why do so many authors leave good story’s on cliffhangers

Good story, well told. Would have been better if Susan hadn't given him the blows, but was just watching him in the mornings. Showing interest, but not getting involved since he was Marie's. At least until she was invited. Now they're guilty of cheating on her from the beginning and both total assholes.

That was a great story and very well told!!

That was a great story and I really enjoyed it.

Read See You In The Morning and this one - this author really doesn't like leaving gaps for the reader. One long story with gap potentials that aren't taken up; the stories have been alright but I have things to do and nowhere to take a natural break.

21 days later instead of 27, @01Timber67 why complain? I would have wanted more in a part 2...

It became a 3⭐️ story as soon as the other sister became involved more than watching at the end

Marrying cousins is legal in Australia too. I enjoyed this story for the second time and have to ask why have you not continued with it? So much more to explore and have fun with yet. Will they stay together and maybe with family blessing and go on to make babies.

I understand their doubts, but Chris and Mary can be together. It's legal. And Susan would be a nice addition. ;)

I don't know why, but there is an opinion that incest with paired relatives is allowed.

Straight brother/sister is a negative.

Second cousins are positives.

Third cousins are a negative.

... of another chapter!

Please.

Find myself even more in love with this girl but I was sure fucking disappointed when I woke and her sister wasn’t sucking my cock. Are you stupid? Don’t write love stories about assholes.

Fuck you. I’m about ready tell this girl I love you but I will let her sister suck me off every fucking morning. I just lay their and fucking smile about it as this great feeling rush up me and I cum every where. FUCK YOU. So tired of losers with no will power. I’ve had my sister wake me riding me and her friend lay beside me rubbing her body on me. Didn’t lay their like some weak willed bastard. I rolled her off of me and told them no. She was step-sister so it wasn’t incest is wrong kind of thing. You like someone then respect them.

Damn, this was hot!

I like having Susan knowing first .

Can’t wait for the next chapter

It was good. This is the second of yours I have read. I figured since it was an older story I could see how you developed. I'd say you were good here too. Just enough twists to make it interesting.

I hope the story that you mentioned you're working on is a new chapter for this one. Very interesting and look forward to more of your works

It's been 12 months since this was published, so I doubt if you will write a part 2 after all this time - which is a shame as this is a great story line.

Rapief

Please write more on this story line. A whole series would be great 👍🏼

If i could give more stars i would want more keep it cumming.

When I first started reading this story I thought Chris,Susan,and Marie were siblings that grew up seperately,but then up to the point where Chris finds out its his Mothers Brothers kids it suprised me,thinking they were his sisters but instead are his first cousins.

But after finding out I thought it was fine because genetically first cousins are only halfblood related,so chances of abnormalities is only half as likely compared to fullblood relatives such as brothers and sisters.So for Chris,Susan,and Marie it shouldn't matter if they want to be together even if later they want to have children,which they may not want.

Also if say Chris and Marie wanted to get Married in most places I think it is legal to marry your first cousins as long as your over 18.Also this story was beautiful and touching for cousins to find each other and be reunited after so long and find love.

Finally I like one of the posters comment that this should be an on-going series and have the cousins slowly reveal their relationships to their families and eventually move in together to be a threesome couple,and have Chris marry Marie,but also have Susan silently marry her sister and cousin during the wedding and all 3 have matching wedding bands to show their love for one another.That is all.

Good candidate for a series

You just need to improve the writing a bit. Your tense is jumping between past and present making it hard to follow everything. Stick to past tense.

Hoping to hear how they deal the issues of love, marriage, family and the law.

And the best news of all (at least for our lovers, Marie & Chris) is that first cousin marriage is legal in many US states, including MA & TX. Not so much in PA though.

It's a real pleasure to read an upbeat family love story like this, thanks!

unknown to each other. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just wanted to say that I love your stories. They have the perfect mix of a story and erotica. Can't wait to read whatever comes next!! Stumbled across this one and spent the day reading everything else you posted.

Engaging writing. Thanks.

Four pages can be too short or too long, depending on where're going to: you packed these pages in a perfect way while also teasing with a sequel that, while much appreciated, if not written would still leave an awesome story on its own.

So hot and well written. Keep this up and keep it this hot!!

How far apart are his and her campuses?

Maybe a different apartment with a larger master bedroom with a king sized bed?

Who knows what the heck will happen? Only the Author knows. Hi

***** *****. *****

Looking forward to another instalment!

This is wonderfully put together! I hope you're going to continue this and lets us see where it goes! Thank you!

We are so lucky in Australia we can legally marry a cousin or an Aunt. The risks these days are only very slightly higher than an unrelated couple. Some countries do have really stupid rules about this. I thought halfway through this story it was all going to crash. Happy that it hasn't but please write more of this hot tale. I would love to read how this relationship progresses.

5 Stars!

Well done story. Amazing way it plays out and the fantasy of those who admit that they would go down this path. Keep up the good work.

well done sir. not many on the taboo section are capable of actualy writting a decent story.

you brought some realism and emotion and i realy like that.

a bit transparant at times perhaps but not much you can do about that i gues.

could do with folow ups, just dont go adding more and more family members in the mix if you wirte next chapters.

well done.

Thank you, it was so good that you didn’t fuck her sister (yet) please write more and include a full threesome