by bi_cathy
A delicious treat. I felt that it was bold of Zoe to react as she did when Megan started to run away, but she must have been desperate at the thought of losing her again. So, is Megan hesitating because of the other two crushes, or her own relationship history? Or maybe she is currently in a relationship?
I love where this series is going, and the slow approach with Megan is perfect. Zoe's internal dialog is wonderful as well. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
With the best writers here (or anywhere) the characters have a life of their own. You have a gift for sharing them with us and for that we are in your debt eternally. Thank you.
So much tension here. I can only imagine what Megan has been thinking this entire time watching as Valentina and Scarlet made their moves and Zoe entertaining them. The idea that she's just another crush, not to mention whatever baggage of her own she has. Such an emotional story that keeps getting better!
Feels awkward, feels good, feels erotic as well. So well crafted — this piece and preceding pieces. Each in own way creates erotic suspense.
Wow. That's an amazing kind of cliffhanger. Warm, hopeful, and terrifying, all at the same time.
For so much of the story, my heart was just screaming "reach out and take her hand!", An it just made it more confusing for Zoe. I understand that Megan is both scared given her history and having to reach out of her safe place. Great job, Cathy!
Feelings are SO COMPLICATED … and you capture them so well. ❤️❤️❤️
You’re also a tease. 😎
so many good comments i took a wile to read this chapter witch i truly regret i can almost taste this chapter well done keep well happy and safe a fan shayne
I absolutely cannot wait ri read the next chapter(s). Such a wonderful story. Please post up soon...
Probably the most cerebral, emotionally intelligent writer on Literotica. This one was a masterpiece. We’re hanging on the edge, awaiting part 5. C’mon Cathy
Sexecclectic said it best: "Probably the most cerebral, emotionally intelligent writer on Literotica." Sometimes authors seem to toy with us. Not bi_cathy. Never bi_cathy. What a tour de force!