by sdsioux
Oh wow that really made me laugh!
Ok chuckles over...
It’s a fairly standard story concept, that doesn’t mean it’s bad though. Given that it’s in a contemporary setting it will work best if it’s plausible. There were some issues with it, I’ll list what I can recall
32DD - there’s nothing wrong with liking or having big tits however at this size the poor woman is going to have chronic back pain, it’s probably a miracle that she can stay vertical for any length of time. Essentially you’ve got a really skinny woman (Starving waif sized) with footballs (soccer balls if you’re in the US) stuck on her front.
Nipple Biting - hell no, that’s something you have to work up to. Nibbling, licking, sucking absolutely and yes please
The G Spot - it’s internal, anyone who can manipulate it with their tongue is probably part werewolf. Your couple should be worried.
Gaylee, tried manipulating Hans so he used a bamboo switch and hit her repeatedly until her arse was red - unless the recipient is a trained submissive her response is NOT going to be "Yes master. Don't hurt me. Fuck me like a whore." She would probably be screaming in agony and fighting to get away. Honestly I think they would both be fighting this other couple the minute he mentioned filming Gaylee and putting it online.
It required a hefty dose of “suspension of disbelief” but it could be interesting.
Tess (UK)