All Comments on '34 Minutes Ch. 07'

I love this last chapter! You have to let them get married, and have babies and live happily ever after! Thank you for continuing with this narrative, I have been waiting so long for you to start writing again. I love Justin and Nicole together.

Justin is sexy as fuck! But if there’s one thing I hate, it’s a man who knows his power over you and uses it to play childish games. I hope Nicole lets him know about himself when she sobers up the next morning.

Great story, sexy characters. It's all very relatable. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Please drop the next one on us.

We've been super patient...any chance we'll get an update soon :-)?

this is still top five stories on this site and a personal fave. i hope you find the inspiration to finish it or even give us your messy half hearted ideas. haha <3

Great writing, really great. Pulled me right in. Also helped me realize how much I miss the game......

I just noticed that from the beginning chapter to #7 there are more that 8.5 years, so I'm going to keep hanging in for more. I do like this story, just ready for this girl to know her mind.

8 years to write a few hundred words showing how much of a mug this girl is? Kill it and do better, you're a great writer but this is weak