All Comments on '346 Steam Up Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MO' ASS (BACK TO YOUR OLD SELF)

JUST SAYING BRAVO ON YOUR NEW COMPOSITION, AND KEEP THE BIG BOOTIES COMING (40 INCHES OR MORE!!!!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

really good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Yes. Way to go.

Good family fun. What more could we ask? I loved it that he fucked his daughter with his wife's full cooperation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
keep doin' what you do best playa

Man this shit was so fuckin hot, my 12 inch missle almosted ripped through my boxers. Love the Lesbian parts, the way you described your daughter, I would have fucked her two. I hope you have another chapter.

P.S. A lot of people think about ramming their daughter once in a while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WWWOOOWWW THATS AMASING

this was apsolutly unbelievable i love every second of it u are a lucky mouther fucker. i cant stop thinking of ur story hope there is more to come

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

I loved the whole thing. both chapteres. So much detail and intrige. you need to keep going with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Smokin'

One of the best stories I've read on here in a long time.

aryz416aryz416over 16 years ago
questionable

I love the love scenes. very detailed. but there wasn't any reality to it. it didn't seem real along with the first chapter. a lot of they other stories here have that feeling that it could actually happen. these two just didn't have that. too much just jumping right into sex. great job though and keep the work coming. maybe throwing diane into the mix or maybe ernesto too. have a nice 5 way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
yes questionnable...

...it had a dispassionate air about it that left it feeling unreal. The dialogue about wanting him or her for so long was like a statement read in court, yet the full-on sex was great. A strange mix of a tale - erotic and yet cold at one go. Sofi xxx

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
Daughter fucking...

So when are you going to run out of condoms and knock your daughter up, too?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I Don't Believe It!

You didn't bring your hot wife along on the trip?! Come on!!! She already had a sizzling 3-way with you & your sister, & as any experienced diver knows, the only thing better than hot pussy is hot YOUNG pussy. I know you were afraid your wife might freak at the idea of you fucking your own daughter, but then again, 3 girls + 1 guy = 1 unforgetable encounter, & who knows, she may have a thing for her hot young niece as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Extremely well done!

I particularly like the central theme in the story, the 346 engine. Most erotic stories do not have such a literary bent, and yours does. The typos and poor use of grammar were slight, and not distracting from the story. You have top ratings!

Warmest regards,

Translator01

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Cheating, pussy-whipped ass wimp. I laugh at the guys who fap to this. I bet the huff of a sneezing stray dog would get them off. Hahahaha!

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