All Comments on '3rd Chromosome - Art Pt. 01'

Is this how you are going to leave this story? You developed a very good group of characters in just two pages. You have brought the story to a place where it can go in several different directions and take the reader along for the ride. Please don't be like some authors on here and just start a great story and then just leave the readers hanging wondering what is going on........

_THIS_ is where you're leavng it?! Come on, don't leave us in suspense! Carry on, please :-D

I know where you two readers are coming from.

I've been waiting two years for a CH.2, it's just so damn good.

I hope that day comes real soon with this and DTs.

Grobnar is such a skilled talented writer, his stories are on another level.

Hope we get some new work from him soon.

It's our gain.

My one issue with this story is where it ends. I'm really interested to see what else happens.