All Comments on '4.75 Seconds'

I thought is was a very good story and both the cheaters got what they deserved. The cheating wife got off pretty easy in my mind anyway. Why others think his wife has balls I don't understand. She was a cheater and there is no excuse and you can't take it back. A promise is a promise. The story was well written with a reasonable plot and method of dealing with the cheaters. The husband got a lot of self satisfaction and big chunk of change out of it. I wished my ex had done it like that, I'd be a rich man today!

Way too short to be a good story.

Bill

Needed to be longer .AAA++

Just another pathetic RAAC story.

No wrap up. Weak ending

3 questions/comments.

1. You talk about a lie detector test, but don't share results :-(. Also the outcome could be used in potential divorce.

2. POST-NUP!!

3. Why is the husband always moving out of the bedroom. Kick the bitch out.

No way do I want her fired .. Then I have to pay for everything . Plus She will be a Bad influence on the Kids .

just as good the second time around I love these BTB and their help mate guys getting screwed. Especially now as I'm going thru my own private suffering that started 40 years ago,

He's an idiot. She'd divorce him for mental cruelty, take half of everything, including the Company payout money, the house and the kids. He'd be living in a crappy apartment. High price to pay.

This is way too short.

NOT TOO BAD, NOT TOO BAD....

Good story, but it needed to be longer as the ending was inconclusive of what really happened after the polygraph, and what happened next in the coming months . 5 stars for the writing.

Good BTB story.

Obviously the creative writing course was a waste of time and money.

you could write a whole epilogue i am always curious how the cheater justifies it to themselves people never see themselves as the bad guy so there has to be a way they justify it

great story good for him, brilliant.

The only happy in this ending is the 'Fuck Rick' part. The rest is just sad sack.

4.75 seconds to kill a marriage, yet they are still together? Defeats the purpose doesn't it.

Despite the criticism, has a ring of truth to what happens to a marriage when either one cheats. The mother gets the children most cases because the father normally has to earn the bacon (and has the better paying job - maybe time for men to demand women are paid the same rate for the same work, that way they can stay at home for when the kids come home from school? just a thought fella's)

Why two star? Because the slut wife still around. Got scott free. What kind of freaking law we have.

Jury still out on keeping her or not. Hmmm what she planned to do on their anniversary??? Dump her! LP

Flint is not in the northeast. Not even northeast michigan

This one really fell flat for me.

The fact the husband kept her isnt shocking, many do stick together but as in this story the reality is few are ever the same after.

That said this really didnt do it for me. No idea why, it just didnt.

Only positives I see is the money and Rick's transfer. As for the cheater getting to stay. I guess this happens more than one would think. One last comment. The story seemed to saunter along with little vim or vigor. BTRH...

He got fucked over by his wife's affair then by the stupid-assed divorce laws. They should be modernized where the woman doesn't automatically get the house, children & $$$ for them, even perhaps if she's cheating. That being said, good for him filing on the job & not being a pushover. But he's going to have to watch her closely, tracking her movements & phone, etc., which's needed for any cheating spouse.

A nice story but I wasn't grabbed. 3 stars. -- Bob

Enjoyed This story. Thanks for writing.

A dumb story full of even dumber cliches that only exist on literotica.

Seriously, these literotica authors have got to stop with the stupid husband-suing-the-company-bullshit. It doesn't have a fucking leg to believability to stand on. The wife might, and I stress might be able to sue for harassment but that's it. The husband can't do shit.

The same goes for the alienation suits. Sure, I'd like for them to not be a legal joke, but that's not the current reality. So, unless the author explicitly creates a world where those kinds of lawsuits actually mean something a bit more than the value of the paper they're printed on, this stupid cliched trope needs to die already.

For that matter, I'd also like it if they stopped with the woe is the husband divorce bullshit. Sure, it's not totally fair right now, but it is a damn sight better than whatever decade think the legal system is currently in.

The only thing stupider than the points above is when the writers have the husband leave and not talk to the cheating wife for days, weeks, or months on end.

He sued the company for what does he have any idea how many lawyers a company can get an the best an as for evidence no one will speak out against a company they work for they won’t risk there livelihood for some guy they hardly know.

Just another cuck story.

Load of bollocks

An ok story, but his polygraph stunt was BS as they are more theatre than science. Some of the questions were invalid too I think as they can’t be given a discreet single value answer. Ami the kids dad yes or no. Simple answer. Who is on your mind during sex a or b? Simple answer. I don’t think anything requiring an elaborate answer works.

Even if it WAS only the second time, it certainly wasn't going to be the last if they weren't caught.

Since he made a point of saying he didn't like a couple of her polygraph answers... Now I want to know what her answers were.

If your goal with writing is to "exorcise the demons" of your first two marriages, I don't know how this quasi-reconciliation story does it. The fact that he can't decide what to do is a decision, and it's the wrong one to stay with her.

Good story. But, you obviously took some literary license, in regards to the polygraph/lie detector test. The questions asked in those tests have to have 'yes' or 'no' answers. Still, overall, a good story.

That was lazy writing if I ever saw any

Way too quick. Weak ending.

Your characters are caricatures. Your plot is a worn out cliché.

great story. it's just to bad in real live it doesn't work out that good..

Short and sweet, I'm sure I said that before but what the hell I'm not a writer. Sure wished I has a comback like he did she she got caught. No excuse for cheating, you want strange? Don't get married. Marriage is boredom waiting to happen if you're relying on sex. There is much more to a marriage than the overated passtime of sex.

Too short lome your cock.

Started out so good, nice reveal of the cheating wife. Nice job ruining the boss and grabbing some money. Gotta at least be told some, if not all the answers, then emotions could have come out for another page or two....

She still effed around and got away with it. No9excuses

Brilliant!!

Cuckoo ahe fucks around and he takes her back....nope

A jury 'wouldn't still be out!!!' Sorry sport, but you loose! You are a loser. You should have bought her a bus ticket to Flint, Mich..

XYZ

Nope not way after the settlement would take her back

Was pretty good up til the end where it just petered out. ⭐⭐⭐

Level the playing field? Did i miss him fucking the three women from the office? Or any other women?

Kick her the curb. Not a smart move

She unemployed and would be considered a stay at home mother now . If she or him file for divorce, he pays alimony and child support for 6-8 years

You anons. as Forrest Gump would say “stupid is as stupid does”

Well the slut will find another fuckboy over time

Bof. Où est le BTB ? C'est vraiment une mauviette.!

[10.04.23]

Short 'n' Sweet!

11/10!!!!!

Anonymous pointed out the problem with your story: "Well the slut will find another fuckboy over time."

Bullshit. To the story and to roadwarrior one below.

Modern no fault divorce?

Joint custody. And in almost every case joint ownership of the house means it's sold and proceeds split between the two of them.

The days of paying for a house you don't live in and guaranteed mom gets full custody are over you morons.

And I have news for you. Judges don't like it when fully employed spouses with years and years of work experience all of a sudden become unemployed and without income conveniently at the time of divorce.

They wouldn't count her as "a stay at home mom" with 10 years experience with job career and income. The judge would say "sorry you lost your job, but have an education, training and capability. Get re-employed...hopefully you'll be earning what you did before. Because that's what I'm basing this settlement on. Your earning history and potential."

Welcome to modern day no-fault divorces.

No discussion of why. Clear sexual harassment case. Lot more effective than alien of affection but requires her buy in. Did she think he would leave Rock alone? Lastly polygraphs don't work like that. Need yes or no questions. He also needed a longer list. Main thing would be to ensure this was the second time only. And no other men or times with Rick. Was she pressured fir her job? Did she have an emotional affair with Rick? Would she support the MC against Rick? And then go to counseling to dig into why and how to work on rebuilding trust. Also a joint admission that their marriage had gone stale. And why all the behavior changes last two months. Without counseling they have no shot.

Nicely Done!

Is It Safe

To drink the tap water in Flint yet? If not, it's another way for Rick to get lead poisoning without going to prison.

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Even if it were true when they were caught and she insists that it was only the second time, it wasn't going to stop there at two times now was it?

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Polygraph questions have to be only yes or no type of questions. It's really only voodoo science at best, even one of the co-creators of the original device didn't believe that it really worked. I suppose that's why the government still uses it in many situations. I would have liked to know what the answers were that he didn't really like even though he thought she passed the test. Signed: BTW

It’s not just you. 80-90% of the authors on literotica do the same. That is after the discovery the husband receives numerous emails/texts from the unfaithful mate. And the husband trashes them. And this often continues. Yes he is angry but that doesn’t excuse stupid! Maybe because I was in service for 20 years where they beat into your head,”Know thy Enemy”, Every scrap of information is important. Some little thing may be the most important. Let’s just address recorded phone calls. She may use the very same words but the tone of her voice may indicate a change. Lastly you authors are forgetting the readers. I’m sure there are more like me that are trying to figure the ending before we get there. By you denying us this info you deny us info to help us guess the ending. That’s part of the fun of reading your stories.

All authors, please stop with lawsuits against company by betrayed husband. They have no standing to sue.

Flynt is not in northeast. I think you got NJ mixed up.

IMHO the demarcation line was crossed when Lisa invited her boss to fuck her in there marital bed...hard to come back from that...

Why? Have to address the cause of why she cheated or it's hopeless. She'll do the same, lie to his face and fuck other men. It's already over and done. Stick a fork in it.

4 Stars as I would have left the cheating cow . But that is my Opinion and does not matter . I bet he will be wondering every time she goes to the store if she is cheating on him

Besides the fact polygraph test questions have to be yes/no for them to work, you got another guy being a coward and handing over his honor, self-respect, and piece of mind to stay in a relationship without trust, respect, or honor. There is a difference between living with divorced parents and living in a broken home. The effect of living in a broken home is ten times worse on children's health and welfare than just a divorce, so staying "for the kids" is not good advice in situations where love, respect, trust, and happiness are damaged or no longer present. Portraying men as week wimps who so easily are manipulated is a destructive.

I feel that stories like this show how truly weak of character the man was in the first place. By staying and not even trying to properly reconcile, he’s cruelly punishing her, and hurting his children’s upbringing.

Truly, he was only ever a good man/husband during fair weather.

A foolish story. The man starts strong then folds completely.

Knowing he was going to get the settlement he should FIRST have divorced her, THEN collect the settlement, outed the dude and then set her up. During the divorce pay everything as the court demands. Then pay off child support for the duration. Do not agree to let her take the kids out of state.

Without a job she can no longer take care of the kids. House gets sold, he has a new house and HE is the custodial patent.

She winds up in the gutter and he's free.

Taking back a cheater is emotional suicide. Her, "I'm sorry" is meaningless. SHE willing deceived him and fucking the guy in his bed is beyond forgivable. This story torpedoed itself and I can't understand why the author wrote this. He's better than this.

Good one!! Thanks for a fun read!

Have to say I would never have touched her again. Forgive with time, but just declare an open marriage and find another love interest until the kids are gone, then the Big D. Bringing the lover to the marital home would be the ultimate disrespect. Because having known, there would be no going back in your mind that the home might as well be the local No-tell Motel.

Good story, but this cheating bitch doesn’t deserve reconciliation.

Meh, bitch got off too easily. The punishment did not fit the crime. Personally use part of the payout to hire a hitman and be done with her. Harsh but fair in my eyes.

Could have forgiven her one fuck, but bringing him into their home and their bed for fuck number 2 would have have been the end of it for me.

Good story, what might have made it better for me would have been the MC still fucking the wife once or twice a week while teaching for someone new to make love with.

Bringing him home was the end of marriage plain and simple no reconciliation whatever, cheating slut showed no remorse only sorry she was caught.

WOULD BE A FIVE EXCEPT FLINT IS NOT IN NORTEAST.

Ugh. No thanks. In order to cheat on someone, you have to, at a minimum, lie, deceive, abuse their trust all the while not caring about their feelings or the wellbeing of your kids. This spells C O N T E M P T. Notice all of the comments from the last 3 months are the same.

The first thing that she says to her hubbie when she finds out that her BF is being transferred is "you prick" . Its a no for me. There is no respect in the marriage from the cheater, she is only sorry that she got caught. Only stay for the kids and get a post-nup for when she strays again.

Funny story...and fuck you for taking a shot at Flint.