by Cristal_di_Canta
So, now you have us on the edge of our seat waiting for the next installment.l. Nice tease.
Can't wait for what is next. You have my attention in more ways than one.
Great beginning, really nicely told, loving it so far, now to dive into Ch 2.
Jennifer
Oh this has great potential, loving it all so far, I hope that you have plenty of chapters for us.
Great start, great plot line so far.
There are lots of chapters and they are already up here on lit. This is a novel length tale with plenty of characters and subplots. Would be great to see it as an actual book!
You write one hell of a story I am working my way through all stories and believe me they are awesome .Please keep writing
Regards bob
On my second visit after a few years absence, absolutely loved this first chapter been there myself, like I said back for more xxx