All Comments on '49 1/2 Shades Ch. 02'

Love where this is going!

What? No Fag Cuck Shit comment? You disappoint me! I've never understood people leaving comments on stories they don't like. Just move along, stud, and find something you do like. And if you didn't like this chapter, you're really gonna hate the next two.

Do you also fail to understand why people leave comments on stories they like ?

more!!!!!

Let's see your submission. I had the balls to write something and put it out there for criticism. You have the right to call my work "laughable'' if you wish. I have the right to respond. But you're hiding behind the "Anonymous" label and telling me that my work is no good while you submit nothing. I pity your fear.

Both chapters were well written and have done a nice job building suspense. You have me genuinely interested in your characters. Nicely done.

Your story line on this series is great. Very provocative read. Please just ignore or delete the self appointed story police, they're idiots. Anxiously awaiting chapter 3!

Chapter 3 pleaaaasssseeee!!!! Live the suspende

Thanks for all the great feedback! This is my first submission on Literotica and it's really great to see all the positive (and even a little negative) comments. The next three chapters will be up very soon. Thanks for reading and stay tuned!

Please keep it going. I'd love to see the next one soon.