All Comments on '4th of July with Indian Spice'

Please continue this.

This story leaves me conflicted. On the one hand, Diya's a shameless homewrecker who'll use her own daughter for selfish gratification. On the other, despite being the exact sort of dom/sub exploitation I normally despise for monopolizing futa incest, I actually -like- the plot: the drama's grounded, the characters don't tip over into cheap caricature, and fucked up as her methods are, I actually have sympathy for her yearning to (re)build her family on her own terms. It's an ugly story, and yet strangely beautiful.

Structurally, the text is mostly sound if prone to Porn Talk, and peppered with grammatical hiccups that get noticeably worse on the second page, as though this was written in mounting haste. The interracial reminders feel a bit gratuitous, but to your credit this avoids the -clumsy- side of the genre.