All Comments on '5000 Words Ch. 01'

It's great to see you here as a writer - and a good one at that! How about 5 *s as a thank you and welcome?

Please bring us more - this was very good!

I can't wait to see more. Great start!

My only complaint is that I want more. I was just about to really enjoy myself when it ended.

Thanks for the feedback, gentle readers, you do know how to make a newbie feel welcome. The other 4 chapters are done, just need to be uploaded and work their way thought the approval process so be patient and stay tuned!

Oh and those with a proflie i will send a response to your feedback and the those with out, well...not so much...

Thanks again!

this is fantastic, your writing is so smooth and gentle. it's so easy to read and follow. and the content is so exciting you can't wait to read the next words. you should truely consider writing for a living. really enjoyed reading this hope to see more from you.