All Comments on '69 Minutes'

Was the thesaurus tasty when you wrote this one?

Wordy!

5

Great emotion in this one! Bravo!

Staccato rhythm around every second, every inch but did not feel erotic. Highly descriptive but no sparks.

@Bazzle - my vibe was “what if Poe wrote [bad] porn?” 😊 Em

@Boyd Percy - add “bitch” and that’s me 😬 Em

@Achtung_Night - thanks, hun 😊 Em

@Migbird - sorry to disappoint. This is not the stroker you are looking for. Em

so erotic

@lc68hunter - thank you, so sweet 😊 Em

Your illustrious tale of carnal eroticism left me with a tingling sensation twixt my nethers as they became engorged with arousal...

@Djmac1031 - back to the thesaurus, hun. Insufficient ornate polysyllables 🤣 Em

This was wonderful, and hot. I read it as a free-verse poem and I loved the rythyms I felt you make with the words.

@toesucker1 - prose poetry for sure, if taut doesn’t sound too pretentious. Glad you got it 😊 Emily

Wow! Just wow!! 😍

@FreyaGersemi - so glad you liked it 😊 Em

Hey Em, follow up comment: Did not have in mind a “stroker” when said this piece lacked an erotic feeling for me, though others clearly were stoked. What impressed me was the style — staccato pace; cadence and rhythm. Not to overthink this piece but when you mentioned Poe — maybe tongue in cheek — I got to thinking about his poetry and suspect if he’d depict erotic behavior poetically it would sexually excite [no bad porn] (?). In fact (and now definitely overthinking), some of his morose pieces of lost love/regret enjoyed an erotic element. Thanks for sharing your creativity — you clearly enjoy writing.

@Migbird - thanks for clarifying. Still not sure I 100% get it. Feel free to PM me if you like. Em

You are rocking this. Sexy!

@WOWS - thank you so much 😊 Em

Wooo! A big cheer for this one, Emily.

Irriguous aperture...oh my 😃

@Anon - thank you 😊 Em

Ho. Lee. Cow. Lemme catch my breath. Pulse-ox says 98% and 91. Not something I'd... you know... but great tempo, building nicely from a comfortable moderato to a pounding prestissimo. Good job.

@MrPixel - thank you so much 😊 Emily

Impressive.

You are a clever lady. Thank you for providing such a sexy read.

J x

@Yesok1 - thank you so much 😊 Emily

Five stars, great job.

What I like so much about this story is the way you pull in the reader into the story, as if they are there themselves. Very good.

@Anon - thank you, that’s exactly what I was trying to do 😊 Emily

@Anon #1 - thank you 😊 Emily

Hot pacing. Loved the "4 mouths". Tempting.

@Arch33 - see, I can write lesbian sex if I feel like it 😉 Emily

So.fucking.good

@AshleyLee12 - thank you 😊 Emily