All Comments on '750 Word Challenge - Accepted'

I did not see it coming! -- JB Edwards

Mission Accomplished! :)

James

but you could totally see it coming. But nice work and challenge completed. Cheers

Somewhere around the middle I thought to myself "someone's been watching the dogs doing it" and then about a paragraph later I remembered the collar. Still, a nice little experiment and well suited to the 750 word limit. I didn't enjoy it any less for figuring it out early.

And since these are animals it may break Literotica's rules. But since they're both animals - no one cares.

1 star

... of a story going to the dogs! One star. 'Nuff said!