All Comments on '9 Paradise Lane'

The story line was good, I guess though, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Keep at it, it was very unusual.

very nice development but what ever happened to rebecca?

Bill Hirt and Kathleen Turner movie. Hot stuff. She played Bill like Mrs. Anderson played that kid. Movie was hotter though. Next story, add some additional details and, please, think about a sequel for this one. He gets out of prison and ...

Tail End Pete

For those of you who think this story is dumb I beg to differ. True it is about being stupid but it is the stupidity of youth and inexperience. A yuong man who thought with his little head no even coaxed and seduced into thinking with it with all emotions being played. Including guilt over not coming to the rescue. No this is totally believable.

The first part was one of the most powerful nonconsant I've read so far. The development was surprising and interesting to read. Good story !

perfect plot and perfectly true! best story i've ever read!

This story is good enough to be developed into a film. I almost didn't read it because the title didn't work for me. I'm glad I did. Thanks for writing the story and sharing it with us. J

story...but it sure sucked to be this kid...it would be nice to see some revenge on this one...any ideas?? keep up the great work, enjoyed running across your writings and will read on. Thanks for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas

That part shone enough to bring me back. It was well written, powerful; the details of the non-con coupled with the conflicting emotions and fear resulting in do nothing made me feel for the voyeur as much as the woman. I only read the second part once and am not sure what I thought. The two almost seem like different stories, and I could enjoy the one part and choose my moment to stop and...well, get what I came for. :P Really do like the first part, though; thought I'd finally say so after reading it several times.

Wicked good you are.