by NatalieH
I've started to read all your Stories. You're my dream of a submissive
Excellent story, very hot and covered a lot of kinks I am into. I could identify with her a lot
Great to see you back in action. Would love to slide into your arse as Jim fucks your wet cunt.
Great that you’re indulging your desires again and even better that you’re sharing them! Look forward to reading more.
You write so well, please don't stop writing. It's an amazing story, and hope to read other parts on it. The best part of your stories are helplessness giving pleasure and cockyman. Keep writing.
This was amazing - it reminded me why I've missed your writing over the past few years. I hope you can find time and inspiration to keep it up!
Very arousing story ! I hope you and Jim meet again and you tell us all about it.
It's fantastic to see you back on here again. Those inner desires just never quite go away, do they?
You wrote: "I masturbated regularly as I read, getting off on my favourite stories of female submission, gangbangs and domination." Please tell us were to find some of your favorite stories. But they can't possibly be as arousing as your own stories.
Having seen your profile posts on the chat site, I decided to see if your writing was as hot as your profile pic. I most certainly wasn’t disappointed, and look forward in anticipation to reading more of your stories. This one was not only a big turn on due to the content but was fantastically well written, and was strung out just enough to get the imagination working overtime. Hopefully I’ll catch up with you at sometime on the chat site, but no matter what I’ll be reading more. Thanks for sharing
if this was real, or another fantasy. Either way, it seemed a real insight into your needs - as you recognize they are - not just desires, but truly, these are needs! Please continue your series of stories. You certainly have another fan!
Simply perfect. The visualisation and realism was brilliant - you delivered an amazing story. I so hope it was true...
I liked this story. Obviously, you are sexy and I am a moderately handsome, slightly over-weight, pale, balding man, nearing retirement. I have dreams of being Dominant. But, I am a comedic nebbish instead. So, this fantasy sits in my wheelhouse. T spins my gears and turns my crank.
Welcome back to Lit. I hope you find your time here worth the trouble.
I'm glad you are writing again. I've had "Builders' Slut" as one of my favorites for years. You really capture the delirium of submission so well. I get caught up in yours.
Best line in this story: “I took my time getting 'dressed' if that's what you could call an outfit that consisted solely of stockings.” To my mind it is an example of typical dry British humour. Congratulations on a well written story highlighted by the insight to the intimate thoughts of the narrator while enjoying kinky sex.