All Comments on 'A Bad Case of Nerves'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great story

Just a really good story keep up the good work one of the best authors on the site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not too bad

Not too bad. Good description, and a great character in Louise. She could've been a little more...reluctant. After all, it was her first time. Both with a man and in a threesome. Overal, 8/10

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
still picking up my jaw...

sugoi! awesome...

Man what a way to shake nerves

HedonistusHedonistusover 13 years ago
Uplift

I was angry and resentful when I opened your story.

I was a living bad case of nerves.

My early years were similar to those of Louise in that I was taught

"never trust a woman" so I could relate to her situation.

There is such fun, such a sense of joy and release in this delightful tale

that wanted only to laugh at everything and everyone, including myself,

when I finished.

Truly, well done - a real Gin & Tonic.

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