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All Comments on 'A Bargain Made: A House Fallen Ch. 04'

by SaddleRider

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 8 years ago
Very nice work

Excellent characters, fine dialog and description.

Well done.

SaddleRiderSaddleRideralmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback.

It is much appreciated. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent.

I am really enjoying this. I can't wait for more.

I nearly never cruise the mind control genre and I just randomly stumbled upon this chapter. I have since gone back and read the rest. Very enjoyable. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Favorite so far

but honestly I can say that for each chapter. I really liked the interplay between Cassea and Deres. It's been nice to see him involved in the story again.

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
Damn good!!!

Deres is the man. It would be nice to see him and Bryana do a joint op (and if they have and I just haven't gotten that far yet... ignore this)

Keep them coming.

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBover 1 year ago

Still not properly linked

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30+, in a poly, and happy to be. I have been asked to put the Erette stories in order here if I could. I can, so here they are: Note: I have been asked to include a story order for the Erette stories for clarity, so here it is in its entirety: 1. A Bargain Made 2. A Bargai...