by SaddleRider
Deres is the man. It would be nice to see him and Bryana do a joint op (and if they have and I just haven't gotten that far yet... ignore this)
Keep them coming.
but honestly I can say that for each chapter. I really liked the interplay between Cassea and Deres. It's been nice to see him involved in the story again.
I am really enjoying this. I can't wait for more.
I nearly never cruise the mind control genre and I just randomly stumbled upon this chapter. I have since gone back and read the rest. Very enjoyable. Keep it up.
Excellent characters, fine dialog and description.
Well done.