All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day Pt. 02'

simply wonderful Jessica... like old wine... your stories just keep getting better. I hope you can do part 3 really fast as well!

A worthy second chapter.

I especially liked the clever exploration of Sara's feelings, first of being naked in a situation where it is natural for others but not for her, then having men for whom it is also unnatural come into her presence.

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Thanks for the 2nd part. A nice continuation. Looking forward to he next part !

I an enthralled by this story. I can't wait for chapter 3.

I hope there will be more to come this story has me riveted please continue thank you

Please give me directions to this wonderfull place and meet me when I get off the plane.

This has to be the very best story I have read by far. I have read hundreds of stories here and never commented before. You are a very amazing writer. Please continue this story!

We need a part 3 and 4 and 5 and....

But all and all a great stroy. 5 stars

I'm happy to see that Sara continues to have fun!

Thank you, I hope you turn this into a book or sell it to a network. I can envision your story as a great late night erotic series on Showtime or Cinemax. Love your style!

This is absolutely scrumptious . ..and instant erection inspiration

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That was absolutely fantastic. I know I am a little late to the party when it comes to reading your stories but I loved this chapter. Her sudden realisation that she was close to orgasm was incredible. Can't wait to read the next couple.

Adam is a wanker of the first order

Absolutely love this story and the premise. On to the next part

Nice! But I was hoping some stranger would board the elevator and catch her masturbating and she would then casually tell them how much she was enjoying it. Keep up the great story line!

This venture into more conventional exhibitionism is good - but the open sex positivity outside the hotel is even better.

It's your story, your fantasy, your kink and I'm glad you share it with the world.

I preferred the strength she showed in the prev. chapter and hoped - while reading - she'd turn to Adam, unbutton his shirt in the elevator, make him get naked next to her and ...

Just saying.