All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day Pt. 04'

Jessica Tang von Harper has made one of the best contributions to Literotica with her novella about Meleprija, and I thank her for this hot story. Anyone who feels even remotely like an exhibitionist will enjoy it.

After reading the complete story, including the second part on Amazon, I have some comments though about Sara, the main character. Sara is essentially taking advantage of Meleprija's innocent culture. By using the permissive culture of the Meleprijans and giving it a different meaning, she also threatens the culture of the country. A culture that will in any case be threatened by the wealth of the sagana trees that are turning the country into the new Saudi Arabia.

The original inhabitants of the island do not experience the shame of public nudity or sex that is inherent in 'civilized' cultures. Exhibitionism does not exist for them either. They can be sexually aroused by the sight of a beautiful man or woman, but not by the object of their desire being naked.

But Sara, without initially knowing it, enters this innocent country with a 'dirty mind'. It is understandable that she is aroused by the sight of naked people in public space, not to mention the sex that is practiced there in complete openness. It is also understandable that she discovers her hidden exhibitionist within herself. But because she uses the openness of the Meleprijan culture by walking around naked in public and having sex, that innocent culture turns into something dirty. Sara is an exhibitionist and she gives a completely different interpretation to sex in public than the Meleprijans. She watches them to get horny, she gets extra horny by exhibiting herself when she indulges in sex on the street. Meleprijnans who see her doing this are not fully aware that a part of their culture is being taken away and changed in this way. Sara turns them into involuntary peeping toms.

This will change the Meleprija culture in no time. More and more tourists will come to the paradise island to have public sex and give it a different meaning. The consequences are obvious. It will be exploited and commercialized. Sex trips to paradise will be offered worldwide. The inhabitants will become more and more aware of their behavior, which they once considered innocent but which they now will see as an aberration. They will become aware of their nakedness and begin to dress. With Sara the snake has entered paradise, including the apple from which the Meleprijans are only too happy to take a greedy, lucrative bite.

I loved it immensely. It was very different, very sexy, and lots of fun. Thank you for writing it.

I absolutely love your stories, and the quality of writing. I just bought the continuation of this and one other of your books off of Amazon

fantastic love to read more please keep up the great work xx

Maybe Linda will be more relaxed at the guest cottage now that she got her groove on. Show a bit of skin. Get dirty.

Great story are you going to finish it.

So relieved that Adam is finally gone. He just wanted Sara for her body, Leon actually cares about her!

... and reporting back after reading the extended version of this story on Amazon: it was definitely worth it! You are indeed a published author Jessica Tang von Harper and you do it well!

On the comments below about continuing - I just saw that there is an extended version on Amazon Kindle - have downloaded and looking forward to reading

Thanks for a great story! I love the way she allows her passion to take her way over the edge into such new experiences. And her body and all those lovely cocks "with stone" are delightful! I am so pleased to see you are still writing and publishing on other stories. Wondering what will entice you back into this story? I was so looking forward to Leon coming back into the picture, and more expansion into the exotic world you have created here.

*sigh* yet another hundreds or even thousands of unfinished story that is actually an excellent read...

You say to be continued, but when.

2016 till now?

6 years later and... please could we have the next installment?

Release chapter 5 plz. Its been ages.

Wonderful story, well written. Glad Sara finally had sex in public with a second person, hoping future chapters will have her fucking many more, not just Leon. And maybe even talking with passers-by as she fucks. I'll be buying the Amazon edition just to see!

Went from 5 to 0 when that manipulative prick Adam came back. Nobody should be coerced into doing anything. He is a useless user, the worst kind of human being. Story or not parasites should be eradicated.

I absolutely just loved these stories. Nice job with the character development, and world building on the island nation of Meleprija.

For those looking for the complete book (which is well worth the read) I urge you head to Amazon. "Meleprija: Beautiful Day" lists for $3.99 to buy, or if you have Kindle Unlimited it's free to borrow. Either way, it's well worth it.

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07MP4Y2YJ/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_tkin_p1_i2

Have jus read this story from start to episode 5 and adored it. Please continue it is one of the best stories here.

I gave you 5*s all the way and placed you on my favourite authors list.

Thank you for making an old nudist happy.

Egarly waiting for Chapter5

Loves this series, and am really looking forward to chapter 5. When is it being written..?

Just re-read this terrific series. Hope Jessica has some more chapters in the pipeline!

It's clearly states To be continued... Please don't leave my hanging.

I enjoyed the story and the good writing, Too bad our society couldn't be a bit more like Meleprija.

As well as being explosively sexy and exciting, this series also has one of the most interesting and unusual storylines I have found here on Literotica. Jessica, I congratulate you and hope you will continue writing further Beautiful Day chapters!

A beautiful story hopefully Jessica will find time to give us the gift us another chapter.

Wow I think this the best writing on Literotica.Thank you for sharing. John

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Have thoroughly enjoyed this series

Have enjoyed reading part 1 to 4 more than once. Eagerly waiting for part 5 of the story. You are an excellent writer

A brilliant story of exhibs. Please continue it! There is a lot of idea in this story what you don't use. For example: Linda must be an exhib women too, who will be catch up by Sara when she is totally nude in public.

Thanks. Really enjoying this series.

So I had to kill 4 hours in the cold sitting in my car waiting for my kid to complete his SAT Test, and then I found your story on my phone. I just had to read all four parts. 4 hours seamed like 10 minutes, and I was ready to place my order at amazon for my own mapa bag !

You are an wonderful writer, I hope you turn this into a book and a movie.

Thank You, !

Sam

Thank you for another outstanding chapter. I hope Leon is understanding and encourages Sara to further experience the erotic culture. Maybe with Adam now gone and just the two women left, Linda might loosen up a bit and enjoy what's available in Meleprija.

I know from experience that these stories take time, refinement, and patience. You really are quite talented. I hope you continue to write. -elgemowtf

I look forward to more episodes of this story. The hot sex great, but I'm hoping Sara starts skipping the clothing; after all, it's too hot to wear clothes.

This story line has so much potential, please continue for 20 chapters.

Some hot sex, but a bit more forced than some of your earlier stuff. For example, the car sex: she seemed to just jump right into it without even any assessment of how loud the engine was, Linda's range of vision, or even whether she felt right about fucking Adam as a person, I mean I kinda had the impression she didn't like him! And it seems like she went really quickly from still-a-bit-shy but burgeoning Dr Olsen to cheeky sex kitten in the space of one story. Feel like I skipped a chapter (but I definitely didn't). All meant constructively of course; you're still one of my very favourite authors <3

Awesome story

Brilliant as usual ! It's such a wonderful surprise to find another episode of this story.

The story was very well written, and I love how you slowly build Sara to this free-minded and adventurous woman. I especially love the part in the lobby, how Sara was letting Adam enjoy her body, and how she was teasing Craig in the lobby line (I was even hoping she would prove her last statement to Craig). Awesome, just awesome!

Meliprija, its effects, its culture, the eroticism. so well depicted. salute to a mistress of high quality erotica. Jessica ..simply brilliant

You are so good at creating new mind blowing situations. Take a bow.