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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So he goes to all the expense and time to divorce her?

And you want us to believe some sex changes everything? Did it change what she did? Did it change the fact that he really didn't want to see her or interact with her? BTW - He should find new friends that respect his wishes. Why would a quick fuck change his mind? That seems to make him both a complete wimp and a mindless dolt. Not a good combination. Not a good story. Another crappy ending.

0zed0zedover 5 years ago
Thanks for the RAAC warning!

So I gave you a two instead of a one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Common theme for the cheating wife.

Why do so many wives need to be entertained while their husbands are working to build the comfortable future they both wanted when they got married?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
After a month or two

her should fuck Mary and make sure Tom catches them

weathermanksweathermanksalmost 6 years ago
Thanks!

I liked it. There were a couple of issues with some things she said, but I really like and want and need happy endings and this ended pretty well. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wife was selfish

Didn't give Henry a chance to participate with her and Mark.

Huedogg2Huedogg2almost 6 years ago
You must be a woman or you think very little of yourself

Pussy is good but not so good I forget what caused my insanity

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Total wimp

Um there is a zero,, it's a "NO" vote. But then again you yanks voted in TRUMP

😂😂😂😂 ROTFFLMFAO... (rolling on the farkin floor laughing my farkin arse off)

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreealmost 6 years ago
Wow

What a shitty story.

About a guy who did the right thing,

but because his slutty ex was pantyless

he sold his believes.

Without explanations.

Add finishing touch with shitty friends,

who don't respect his wishes and decisions.

As there ain't no zeros I give this a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ouch

How can they love there spouse yet cheat repeatecly?

And even telling him how good it was?

Nope don't see your ending of them back together

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
i just wish

More stories had revenge fucks.

Stories about women being cheated on have them frequently.

Seems woman pov stories of betrayal have more balls than male ones. sheesh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Schwanze

is a closet cuck.

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 6 years ago
Biguy

is such a puss.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Stupid

You dropped the ball on this story. What stops her from cheating again nothing cuz he's got no back bone. Really dumb ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So catches her with her lover

And doesn't even her snatch afterward to protect her from disease or pregnancy? Not sure he ever really loved her. Only 4 stars, because he was a bit selfish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This guy is just stupid

He marries her, she fucks around on him, he divorces her, she hunts him down, she whores herself back into his life, he fucks her, he takes her back.

Just fucking stupid. What's in the future?

She gets him back, he marries her again, she fucks around on him again, because she knows that he'll keep taking her back.

He wants a piece of ass? Fuck her, fuck her ass, get a blowjob, tell her that he'll never take her cheating skanky ass back ever again and leave her there with her cum leaking holes for his ex-friends Tom and Mary to clean up. Fuck them if they can't stop meddling in his life.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Late Comment

"He kept me company when I needed someone." - Um, and just where were Tom and Mary when she "needed someone"?

They're such good friends of hers that they deceive (betray?) her ex, ALSO their friend, for her, and they couldn't keep her company when Henry was out of town?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF!

Me, I'd of started walking home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really bad ending

I'm thinking he locked the door and didn't have to listen to her bullshit. You want us to believe he had some sex, listened to the "little" head and took her back. Horribly done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Even Sandy Koufax couldn't pitch a no-hitter every time.

I felt like this was not one of your better efforts. She expressed no contrition. She called it a 'mistake' and even tried to lay it off on him. Frankly, this came off as being written by a woman. Attention all cheaters: when you go back to your fuck-buddy a second time, you lose the 'mistake' excuse. She got to play all she wanted with her little fuck-toy. It didn't last and now she wants to come back. Give the ex a little pussy and she's in like Flynn. No harm, no foul, right? She plays, he pays. Sounds like a damn good deal. Because it is, for her.

lance_spearmanlance_spearmanover 6 years ago
Too simple

The alternate version just published sbrooks is better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
other authors...

...did much better on their versions of this story.

She is bragging about how good the sex with Mark was, not the least bit sorry and of course was husband's fault

One of your worst

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ouch

I'm predisposed to RAAC stories, but I feel it needs to come with a cost. Otherwise, I just feel bad for the spouse who was cheated on and feel that the future is set up for a repeat.

LoejtcLoejtcover 6 years ago
Not into RAAC

However, he was man enough to divorce her. This scene occurs more than 2 years after the adultery is discovered so it's not like he caved in immediately. She was contrite and apologetic and vowed she still loved him. She offered herself without strings. So maybe they can make it again.

Just don't buy the "move in tomorrow" decision. They are not the same people they were 2 years ago. Both have changed whether they know it or not. I'd like to see Henry drag out the dating period to see if she will tolerate his schedule or start badgering him to remarry. The latter would be an ill omen that her contrition was a matter of convenience rather than sincere regret and acceptance of the pain she caused him.

etchiboyetchiboyover 6 years ago
Yeah, what he said...

... pussy-wand.

The changeover is ridiculously fast. Cant do enough to keep away from her, then in a matter of minutes he’s asking to move back in??? RAAC is one thing, but this is unbelievable, given the set up at beginning of story.

SystemShockSystemShockover 6 years ago
Well at least it's tagged properly

The most common instrument of RAAC: The magical Pussy Wand. One roll in the hay and all is forgiven!

I will say that the wife here wasn't as malicious and unlikable as so many of them are in RAAC stories, but does that really make her that much more deserving of a second chance? Maybe; the author clearly thought so.

I know it's a flash story, but it had me intrigued enough to want more background on the characters and the situation. But oh well.

MusicGuy4FunMusicGuy4Funover 6 years ago
Nice

I felt this was a realistic story. Finally a story telling what a real, intelligent guy would do.

After all we expect women to forgive us.

Ken

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5! GREAT Cuck shit!

eat it anony

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Re-Reading

"You both still live in the same area so you're going to see her from time to time." - Apparently he's successfully gone 16 months without seeing or at least dealing with her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WHY

Why would anyone take a cheating ex-wife back? Kind of a dumb story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WoW

Another mug bites the dust

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 6 years ago
Um...?

"My point was that I had really enjoyed it and you didn't know, so in my mind it didn't affect you, or us. So I did it again and you walked in on us that time. And even then it hadn't been as good the second time as it was the first, though it was still good. Not good enough to lose you over, though."

"So, if you'd only come back so I could do it some more withOUT losing you that would be great."

Oh, and prior to that...

"You were gone working so much..."

"So, you know, if you're going to be doing that some more knowing that you'll forgive me and let me fuck around some more would also be great..."

Ok, so she feels bad... but without any real consequences, what proof is she giving that she won't do it again...?

Raleighman53Raleighman53over 6 years ago
I really like this

Everyone human makes mistakes. Those mistakes are when we learn. If they still love each other as much as they profess, and I believed they did, then this was the only acceptable outcome where they could both be happy.

I do not buy into once a cheater theory. Sometimes with great pain people can learn and overcome.

I know, I'm a softie.

ErotFanErotFanalmost 7 years ago
Nice little story.

I particularly liked the Tom character. A true wingman.

krnchrmankrnchrmanalmost 7 years ago
Crap

I wish you could get a negative score, wimp.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
No way

She screws around on him and he's supposed to forgive her just like that. I call bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sorry!

But, I loved it. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ending

I liked ending. Most stories end with characters never getting back to gether, some happy some sad but this one speaks of learning ,getting wiser, and forgiveness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fuck no...

"I fucked Mark because you were working so much." Pure bullshit! When Tom refused to take me home I would have waited, taken his keys, and then called him to pick up his car at my place. This story was worth 1 big fucked-up star. A waste of 10 minutes of my time.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysalmost 7 years ago

Lazily written RAAC style story, with none of the effort needed to make reconciliation feel plausible or acceptable to the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
pathetic!!!

What a dumb asshole, hated this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ive seen a few of those Reconciliations.

They rarely work out. the people are the same. Time goes by and repeat.

Those that do work out are often because the spouse is so lonely they put blinders on and ignore more cheating.

The substantive way to grow is to move on a wiser person.

Ntropy586Ntropy586almost 7 years ago
Utter piece of...

You couldn't even be bothered to take the time to craft a plausible progression for your characters? I'm not saying that this has to be a BTB-style story, or that there cannot be a reconciliation; what I *am* saying, however, is that you have to give the reader a path to follow, some form of logic and reasoning - or at least an explanation of the emotions being experienced by your protagonist and how they are affecting him - so that the reader will be able to accept where things end up. You have to write as if your readers are going to be intelligent and discerning when they read what you've written. In literary terms, the world you create is supposed to allow the reader to experience "suspension of disbelief." (yes, it's a real concept)

You took the easy way out and didn't bother to create a believable path to lead the reader from "he cannot stomach being near his ex" to "they're back together." That's lazy writing and, quite frankly, more than a little insulting to the reader.

There's a reason I left the final word off in the title for this comment: equating what you wrote to excrement - in any way, shape or form - would be a tremendous insult to excrement everywhere.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
pathetic sheep

did like he was told like a nice wimp. ☆

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
TO COIN JACK NICHOLSON WORDS "" I'M BACK""

I have had a change of heart towards this story! Ok here goes?

So now their back together! ONLY TIME WILL TELL (never truer words)

Will she stray (cheat) again? Only time will tell!

Will it work out for them? Who knows Only time will tell!

Will they have kids? I hope for their sakes! Only time will tell!

My revised award for the story is 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Love you all! GREG. See ya!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
and they left together ....

This is a pleasant little tale of two people whose lives apart were so much less than their lives together. Pain, grief, and suffering can only last for so long before they must be replaced with other emotions. I felt that this relationship would succeed in the long term. Your writing style left enough unsaid that I was brought to this conclusion. Good job!

HankWTullamoreHankWTullamoreabout 7 years ago
I kept on taking a cheater back

And it does not work.

The cheater has to change their identity to stop cheating. Most don't.

"I was lonely" = I'm too self centered to reliably do the right thing.

boatbummboatbummabout 7 years ago
A Tight Little Story, But....

....once a cheater.... well, you know the rest. (I was lonely? What a lame fucking excuse!)

Why reconcile? Well, you know the definition of insanity: performing the same action again and again, expecting different results.... Henry is setting himself up for more serious heartbreak down the road; hopefully they won't have kids so the next divorce won't screw up their lives, too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice!

It obviously doesn't score well because of the BTB crowd, but I enjoyed it. I truly believe you have to try and make it work. There are plenty of marriages that have been pulled out of the ashes. I simply hope I would give it some effort if I found myself in his situation.

FD45FD45about 7 years ago
Nice

One of the thing missing in a lot of the stories is compassion, empathy and forgiveness.

Would I forgive a cheating wife? Not sure. Probably not. But I would not automatically dismiss the possibility. Certainly am not in the 'shoot her in the face' category.

This was a nice little tale of hope and love, even if it was strained and stressed. She wasn't an evil bitch and she was self aware at her mistakes.

This worked for me. I am not always into reconciliation but this story made the case for me in a tightly worded scene.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
While I like the writing style and the beginning of the story (you did warn us!)...

...I found myself grinding my teeth and wanting for all the world to kick his "friend's" ass. Equally, the cuck should have been out, knee deep in pussy every night he could.

Moping, is no way to move on. He got his divorce, and no easy feat there.....so why waste all of that hurt, anger and expense (both time, money, angst and self doubt) on moping and self recrimination? You lick your wounds for a bit, then get your head out and get back in the game, yo!

OK, OK, he should NEVER have bad feelings toward the fairer sex because of what his ex-wife did, like women would never do shit like that to men...never have, never will....shya, hoser! Sorry, but that flies in the face of human nature.

But this bum was pathetic. It's his own fault he was left with little choice but to take her back and swallow his dick in doing so. Hell, at the least, he should have wrangled a sympathy fuck from her best single friend. It seems they never understand what they've done until they experience it first hand. Then, well then the real drama begins.

And hey, I'm not bitter....., just educated at the point of the barb about disloyalty, disrespect and selfishness.

So. Reality....not so much. Interesting...well OK, if not particularly representative of human nature.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
IT'S ALL ABOUT WHAT YOU SAY

I've said it before writers slip a sour lemon in to Guage your response! Very clever!

BUT having said that with the population we've got this could be a true story?

NAH COULDN'T BE COULD IT? Love you all! GREG. OH 50 % for the story 50 % for the slut whore of an ex who tricked the ex husband into taking her back "FOOL " In Mr T's words

smokepolesmokepoleabout 7 years ago
garbage

one would think he would have learned a particularly painful lesson the "first time"...

Then, some writers just write this shit to get the honorable among us upset.

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 7 years ago
Huh... interesting comment of his...

"No. I've been on a few dates but nothing ever came of them. You?"

"Just working."

"No dates at all?"

"I haven't been particularly welcoming to your gender lately."

What was unsaid but should have BEEN said was: "Because if you can't trust the woman who professes to love you above everything else, how can you trust any other woman?"

I mean really, you ever expect she'll respect you now?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Big guy

With little balls,

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
They don't hate women

Instead it would seem that they understand that when you marry someone you put them first, always. She didn't do this. Oh it was a mistake? Well some mistakes have consequences. How about this: if you can't do it in front of your spouse then you shouldn't be doing it. She made the choice, and then made it again. A clear choice. No drugs, no hypnosis, no brain washing, just she felt neglected. How about you discuss this with your husband instead of jumping in the sack with someone else who just wants in your pants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes, we were warned

Perhaps it's because I don't tolerate being manipulated, don't like surprises. He made up his mind that her infidelity was intolerable. Once is enough. I'd have called a cab or started hoofing it home. Friends don't play middle school games with friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What's with these annoy who hate women so much they want them to burn

Good story , if it works and they are happy no harm. Those who must hate women just want her dead. I wonder what happened to make them so. There are good women and good men, bad women and worse men.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
No way

No way... he is a wimp... I would have said to her: "You are beautiful, your body is fantastic... I loved you to the bottom of my heart... I was faithful and sacrificing for our future.. you never complained... but you filled your needs by breaking your vows and by destroying my love for you.... I know you said you love me and none other... Yes your heart is strong in you, but your pussy is dominant... You will never change, you so easily went to bed with another man, and I suspect you will again... now please, let me heal and remove yourself from my life that I am trying to rebuild."

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
OK

Short & sweet...

Tootight1Tootight1over 7 years ago
good story

It's a good story, what can I say. It is a little too neat, but sometimes life works that way to. From what she said in the bed room I don't know if I would trust her. "And even then it hadn't been as good the second time as it was the first, though it was still good. Not good enough to lose you over, though." Maybe . if he goes on the road again she will go back on her quest. One that is good enough to leave her husband.

It is a good story, but my final thought is that she may be a good fuck, but I wouldn't want any kids to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
@ Onethird 10/09/16

So, eat any good creampies lately or do you just fap off to watching your wife get fucked by a actual man?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lol

her; "im sorry fancy a fuck"

him; "ok"

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Codependency is not sexy

I like the author but not the subject matter so 2*s is all you get. This is written with the idea that she is totally repentant about what she did. I cannot accept that logic as the very first thing she does is to use her body as a weapon to muddle his thinking. To be followed by remarriage and a better thought affair next time. The immediate sex is a dead giveaway. Now, tom is no friend of his. Regardless of how despondent Henry is or was, a true friend would never place his pal into a potential dirty mess just to give him short term relief. Poor Henry is headed for repeat heartbreak in this scenario. Tom may know Henry better than Henry knows himself. But he sure as hell doesn't know Connie nearly as well.

The last indicator was that after the breakup Connie dated repeatedly. Henry did not. So which on has the greater love and/or devotion? Why Tom would butt into this extremely imbalanced situation is quite dubious. But it cannot be for anything other than the most shallow of reasons.

OnethirdOnethirdover 7 years ago
Skip the pain part

Nice short story. I got to skip the painful break up and get the reconciliation. Of course all the rejects come out of the woodwork to piss all over any non-BTB, but don't let that stop you writing things you feel like. 5 stars to cancel a few tolls.

SelqSelqover 7 years ago
Good story about a bad situation.

I would not take her back, but that's me and not your character.

Though I don't agree with the ending, it is still a solidly written story.

Looking forward to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too close to this one

I can't give it a zero star so I won't grade it. The writing as usual, is spectacular, but the story is almost mine.

My girlfriend and I were planning to marry. My job had me driving 2 1/2 hours one way, an eight hour day and then head home. The days were long and as I was a logger, I was exhausted when arriving at home. My girlfriend had her own place and planned to move in with me after the wedding. She had a few things at my place but didn't spend the night often.

Weekends were for resting for the following week, but I was always there to spend both days with Karen. A night out almost every Saturday and I was in bed, often not alone, early.

Then came the day a cylinder in our log loader blew off and it had to be specially ordered. It was a Wednesday morning so I figured for 5 days of rest and time with my beloved. After getting home, I quickly showered off the mud, changed into clean clothes and backed my F350 4 door four-wheel drive out of the 2 car garage. Yes, I was proud of them both, I'd saved up and paid cash for the used Ford and built the garage myself and the help of friends.

The problem was, when I got to Karen's, Bill, her ex-boyfriend from high school was parked in her driveway. Never one to be jealous or worried about the woman I loved and thought she loved me, I used my own key to let myself in. When no one was in the kitchen or living room, I assumed they had went elsewhere.

But then I heard 'the' noise. Investigating, I found Karen riding Bill's ample cock and talking. Same old shit, such a huge cock, I missed this cock, I hope you have a big load for me, I'm going to suck you up for a third one when you're done. WTF? She swore she was a virgin, although I'd never had one and didn't know what it would feel like, and a 'third one'?

Her left side was toward the door when I marched in. She shrieked and tried to fall to the side, but I grabbed her hand. Bill laid there, afraid to move. I twisted the engagement ring from her finger, tossed her the house key and left. Behind me I could hear her screaming for me. Passing her purse, I stopped and took my own house key back. She almost caught me, running naked with cum plopping out of her cunt.

Of course, she tried to contact me, stopped by and pounded on my door and the windows. A few times she waited along my road to waylay me before the crew bus stopped to pick me up. Just a quick text and they would pick me up on another road behind me, although I had to travel through about 200 yards of timber.

The wedding was off and she seemed out of her mind to the friends who talked to her. Everyone came to me, saying she wasn't going to give up on us, she made a mistake, it would never happen again, she loved only me, she wanted have my kids and grow old with me, blah, blah, blah.

Then came the people who invited me to parties or get-togethers, in order to throw us into the same group. Once I saw she was there, I made it a point of slipping out the back door and leaving. Yet she and most of the do-gooders wouldn't give up. Unlike the moron in this story, I told her no way, wasn't going to happen.

Finally I happened to be driving past her place on my way to the store and noticed Bill's car there again. It was almost dark, so I waited a few minutes before taking my cellphone and switching it to video. Hers was a one story home and she was just stupid enough to not close the blinds. I was able to get very clear and damning video of her riding him in his favorite way, cowgirl style. After about 10 minutes of fucking and sucking, smiling and kissing, I had enough. I stood there and continued watching while I began queuing it up to be sent. I sent it to a couple of our mutual friends, a few of her friends, her parents and sister and oh yeah, she was on the list too. I hit send and waited for the fireworks.

Karen loves her fucking phone. I knew if it chirped, no matter if she were fucking or not, she would take the time to look. Sure enough, it chirped and she had to see who it was. Sitting there on Bill's cock, she took the time to open the video to see what I'd sent. For only a few seconds did she seem excited, until the video began to play. I'll never forget the look on her face when she turned, still impaled, to stare where I was standing outside the window.

Of course she was done pursuing and trying to talk me back into it. Within a month, she had move to Ohio with Bill and I heard they married. Two kids and three rounds of STDs later, she moved back home with her folks.

Me? I'm still playing the field, looking for Ms. Right. I know she's out there, but her name certainly isn't Karen. Only a fucking fool would do that again.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 7 years ago
Because of redux

therefore I won't grade it.

0zed0zedover 7 years ago
Meh!

Out of curiosity I read this tripe because of the new redux. I'm sure sorry I did!

I'm hoping redux will be be better than this wimpy RAAC shit.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 7 years ago
Damn

Read this because of the new redux. I normally go nowhere near a tale like this. We'll see if the new tale fixes this, this,...

no rating

payenbrantpayenbrantover 7 years ago
Gave it a 4...

Not a bad concept. But she cheated twice. Once was too much. If he can get past it, more power too him.

Tom deserves one good right cross on the jaw though. Friends don't do what he did.

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 7 years ago
Once a cheater

...always a cheater.

Dump the bitch and move on with life.

2/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
sorry can't justice raac

Married only four years. Both wanted money he made so they could have future. Did she ever mention all the time she was spending with Mark in their house. Doesn't appear she expressed her loneliness to husband. She admitted enjoying spending lot of time with eventual lover. She did not feel guilty about cheating and would have continued. If she truly regretted cheating she would not have talked to Mark when he called after they were csught.

Human nature dictates she will do it again. She cheats he takes her back establishing a precedent. The scales having not been balanced where she sees him having sex with someone else. The scales will remain tilted in her behalf.

I enjoy romance as much or more than anyone. But nowhere does she express guilt. She has convinced herself and probably her family and friends that she was justified in cheating. She even tries to convince him.

Tell you what, let her move back, but no marriage. Let him start talking and confiding in female friend of theirs. Mark certainly knew them both and was most likely considered a friend. Then at some point when she leaves for weekend visit with family, he moves female in for the days she is away and he is screwing that female when she comes home.

See how willing she is then to keep living together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice

nice one.

The story had her essentially not loving her husband much, so she cheated.

This is else every military, police, fireman, pilot, or anyone else that works long hours or has to travel away for periods spouse would cheat. And majority dont.

So I would have written it a tad more to reflect reconcile as a tastier thing. Maybe cheated once while drunk or drugged?

But willingly, repeatedly, just because husband had t work, to support her?

That a cold woman there.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 7 years ago
Too smooth

Lacked drama. I'd have had 2-3 people who didn't know them burst into the room looking for their coats, with laughter shreeks and embarrassment. Breaks the mood, adds reality

All that said, I enjoyed the story

Chilley

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not short enough

Story was acceptable till he asked what did she want? Can't any of you writers understand what it is to be a good man? Being a man doesn't mean being black, 6'8", with a 14" thick cock, who fucks everything that moves or breathes making babies in every oven he can! (Sounds like the NBA, NFL, or the hood, doesn't it?) No, I'm happy to say that good men died on the battlefields of every nation. They farmed unfarmable land. They fished in the most dangerous waters. They built the most incredible buildings. None of these men would accept her bullshit reason and they would not let the fear of jail or some asshole judge stop them from doing what needed to be done. Unless rape was involved, no excuse satisfies. Otherwise the wife is just a stupid cunt, weak and debauched. A GOOD MAN shouldn't be shackled to that thing, and certainly not take "it" back. You write of weak, shallow, posers who think lust is love, and that they can't LIVE without the traitorous cunts. The explanations are all weakminded. Guess I'm going to have to school you all with a story of my own

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WTF annony you really are a

old fat ugly fag!!!!!! Gave it a 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
hey honey

You were always so tired and gone all weekend shopping that I decided to screw the hot next door neighbor who is always so nice to me. You never noticed so I though what the hell and kept doing it. Too bd you walked in on us her wearing that special nightie I bought you for our anniversary but hey YOU WEREN'T WEARING IT AT THE TIME SO NO HARM RIGHT??

I have dated a few females since the divorce but they were just one and done.

Why don't you come over her a suck my cock and I will consider letting you take me back. No guarantees I won't go elsewhere in future next time you go shopping and I get horny. You took me back this time so I am certain you will do the same over and over agin in the future

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 7 years ago
@BigGuy33

Did you get my Email that I sent through Lit?

Please respond, thanks!

kimi1990kimi1990over 7 years ago
@myman

Hey, lover, how does that work? You can make more than one anonymous comment? How cool is that? Now, If I can only figure out how, I'll be making all sorts of come ons. I'm a virgin at being anonymous, so this is really special, Lexipoo. This way, your RL lover won't get jealous. We need to figure out a code word so you know it's me. Maybe I'll sign as Inamorata. Oh, I like this.

Lex1Lex1over 7 years ago
Btw anon

We all know that you are the same person who did both comments, and not two separate people. Lol.

Lex1Lex1over 7 years ago
@ the last anonymous and javmore

@javmore

Your haters are kind of adorable in that temper tantrum sort of way.

@anon

Funny. You just proved his point. Lol. In case you didn't notice, all of his stories score pretty well. On top of that, he gets a lot of congratulatory comments.

Keep hating. Lol. Seems like that is all you can do

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
@javmore

I think the last anonymous nailed you. People cheer you on? Your story scores don't seem to show much cheering. Don't you delete all the comments from people that think you can't write? I think I remember you doing that. At least this author has the balls to leave comments like yours up.

@bigguy33. Nice story. 100 percent better than anything Javmore ever wrote. Isn't it funny that people that can't write get on here and tell people how to write?

javmor79javmor79over 7 years ago
@anonymous

Thank you so much. I think it is important to thank your haters as much as the people who cheer you on. To think that you wasted an entire comment just to diss me means something. Like it or not, the fact that you think of me when I have no idea who you are is kind of touching.

Once again, thank you .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good job, Harry

Everyone knows what Javmore is going to say when they see his name. He's going to make excuses for being an asshole. Just another wannabe cuck and RAAC writer, waiting for the bull, trying to give advice to people that can actually write. Hey, Luedon, the most odious thing on here is you.

javmor79javmor79over 7 years ago
@harry

I sometimes wonder how in the world you interpret what you read. It feels like you don't even speak the same language as everyone else.

I said nothing about whether or not the reconciliation was good. I said it was believable, because it happens. He was vulnerable and not stable enough to think clearly. There are many reconciliation that happen this way.

If you actually read on, I also said it sucks.

At least make sure you comprehend a comment before you start blasting away. It would also help if you fully read it. Don't just have some predetermined idea of what you think I'm going to say, and read one or two sentences that confirms it.

luedonluedonover 7 years ago
Well said Mr Brooks

Comparisons are odious and should never be made.

Lue

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 7 years ago
@Harryin VA

I'm not a fan of this story, but -

Neither javmor79 nor the story said: "Sex with the other guy was better than what I got from you BOTH times"

What WAS said: "My point was that I had really enjoyed it and you didn't know, so in my mind it didn't affect you, or us. So I did it again and you walked in on us that time. And even then it hadn't been as good the second time as it was the first, though it was still good."

So she really enjoyed it the first time, it was still good though not AS good the second time, and there was NO comparison to him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Really?

If you're writing a reconciliation at least TRY to justify it. This is the typical illogical nonsense that most cuck authors on this site write as a means of justifying their continued association with their own cheating spouses.

c24jc24jover 7 years ago
Fun

Fun, albeit somewhat quick, reconciliation story! Of course, if you drawn it out to 5 pages or more, the BTB'ers would still hate it, and reconcilers might have gotten bored. As is, it's a good flash reconciliation piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I hated what you did but I never hated you

That has to be one of the most fucking stupid statements in history. Just another story about a no balls sissy coward. "Pathetic story ahead" is what the warning should have been at the start of this crap.

illjoyilljoyover 7 years ago
@ twentyseven

Called power of pussy with combination of backstabbing "friends" and unwillingness to move on from something toxic hence RAAC

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 7 years ago
That Was Quick

One fuck and all is forgiven. You have to admire a man with willpower.

icebreadicebreadover 7 years ago
This was an ok story.

I liked it anyway so I gave it a four.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What kind

Of a brain dead moron wrote this?

bruce22bruce22over 7 years ago
Fine Story

Sounds like a logical plot that must have a certain chance of succeeding. But I have to admit that I would date her but certainly not let her move in right away. She would have to convince that she understood what happened to her and had structured a reasonable defense against repetitions.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 7 years ago
Feet

Walk home!

Or, call a cab!

If the latter, go out a back door to make the call, and have the cab meet you a block or so away ... in the opposite direction from where you might be expected to be walking!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
He must have divorced over his pride, rather than because she cheated on him......

...breaking her wedding vows and any and all trust that may have existed.

It's true that in real life couple that divorce get back together. I think it's something like 25%. Maybe more, maybe less. That it happens at all is somewhat astonishing to me. Even though I understand why, it seems more because neither really moves on.

So, in this case, I wouldn't call it RAAC, but more RASC (..Small Cost).

I'm at a crossroads on this one.

Mark was obviously a predator, so should experience a little fucking up as part of the friendship exit strategy. Wifey paid with a divorce she didn't want. But the "reconciliation" seemed quite abrupt. As far down the depressed scale as he seemed, it seems to me that any contact with the ex would be far more tentative, than precipitous.

Maybe that's just me.....but I think I'd be out looking for hookups every chance I got...just as soon as the divorce came final.

And I doubt that I could ever do more than recreation fuck an ex wife. Too much water under the bridge.

But thank you. It gave me something to think about.

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