All Comments on 'A Beloved Mom'

Makes one wonder what holidays at your house is like in real life.

Too bad the boy did not get both momand sister pregnant!

he should have raped her hard.

Great story, the plot and the brother-sister dialougue about "transgressions" really added to the overall feel of the story

normally incest stories just deal with incest. but this explains why its pleasing. not only that, but its great to masturbate to.

A fine word smith with the wicked sort of mind I love! Excellent capture of the mood & eroticism of the story.

Excellent plot and well written story of sibling lust and adventure. I loved the scenes with Jill and Mom They are very hot.

What a hot sequence. You do have a way with words and a wicked sense of adventure. Lets see how things procede in the next installment

well paced ..good character [or lack of] development, exciting and totally believable

Well written story of forced (well almost) incest. There must be many moms around who could enjoy their kids like she does

I have to say that it's rare that one can find a decent story on here, but you've managed to come up with a creation as interesting as it is erotic. You have just the right balance of story and sex, and plus, almost no grammar errors! The only problem is that I lost who was talking sometimes with the dialogue.

call 302-8962. hear me recount my many incestous childhood experiences

Excellent story! So good I had to jerk off at the computer.

the guy now seams to have taken over unless that was the idea and a song for the begining part *ether Blind or dancing with tears in my eyes by Ke$ha(kesha for those that don't understand)