All Comments on 'A Big Surprise'

Very erotic. One of the best body worshiping stories I've read. You took your time presenting Jack's descent and that was amazingly erotic.

Thanks for writing it and posting it!

Would love to read more about Jack's submissions to Russ. Sounds like Jack is on his way to being an insatiable bottom!

Finally, a well written, dialogue included, story that delivered what the title promised!

Great buildup, I could feel the desire grow as mine grew too !

Loved it. I felt the lust growing. Would love to read more.

I beg for more!

It was well written and kept me wanting to read more. . I would like that 8 inches in me. . wow!

The pacing of this was fantastic. It was really hot all the way through and delivered right until the end. Fantastic read!

This story was great, as good as your other stories. The whole setup of this story is fantastic, the buildup, the growing sexual tension, and the final sexual gratification. I look forward to seeing more of your stories. QUICKLY.

Very well written. I could almost feel that 8 incher.

As a female visitor to the gay stories, I found this thrilling. I am new to literotica (day 1 ) and am having the time if my life exploring the different sections. I would love to see two men together. Hope you guys don't mind me reading through your personal intimate secrets. ;-) Emily.

Hot sex, wonderful delivery and amazing creation. A really great piece.

That was a really great story. Making me dream of being Jacky. :)

Edgy. Sexy as all hell. Sweet. Intense. Satisfying. Perfect in every way.

Excellent - superbly well written to keep you wanting more - and getting it!

A very different story to those I write - almost straight into the sexy side of things with remarkably little build-up.....not that much was needed here!

Loved the dialogue too.

6 stars - well, I would if I could!

So ama zing and perfect! Please more of these two! !!???!!!

Wow! That was one hell of a sexy story! Got me so wet! Would love to see more of Russ and Jack! Ow- Jacky! B-)

I want to know if Russ holds to the deal!

It was fun, hot and romantic. Looking forward for the "SUNDAY ACTION".

Please Harry

Man I want to be Jacky so bad I would luv to suck his cock and let him fuck me crazy!

I have blown several loads to this story I would love a sequel.

Such a hot story, still waiting to read about their meeting on Sunday.

SEXY to the MAX! I love both Jacky and Russ! Keep them going! Maybe Russ will suck Jacky too!

Loved it! So many stories can't handle writing about one guy only giving while the other simply takes, but yours accomplishes it expertly. Totally hot! I was completely turned on by the fact that neither Russ nor Jack were feminine in the least.

I thought your story was simply brilliant, in several ways. Please, keep up the ingenuous work!

Yum!

That was so fucking hot. I’d love to be Jacky. My little sissy clit is leaking all in my panties. I can’t wait for my husband to get home and fuck his little sissy wife raw and breed me. I’m going to rape him while we read this together. 10*s!!!!

OMG - the description of the incredible muscles all over Russ was hot enough but then the sex was mind-glowingly hot as well! Keep writing - please!

I'm waiting for Sunday...and Monday...and every day after that! Absolutely loved how Russ "guided" Jacky into making love with that great cock. Russ' body is a sexy machine -- and hopefully he can grow a bit more hair for that sexy chest. It would be nice somewhere along the line if Russ could also suck Jacky. Either way, keep these two focused on each other, and they work to bring untold pleasures to each other! Russ is a very loving and attentive young man!

loved your story dude; I hope that there will be a 2nd part.

In your build up of the Jack's first blow job of Russ, you made it a huge point that Jack was really wanting to taste Russ's cum, but when Russ came, you pretty much moved through the tasting part a little too fast. I would have thought that Jack would have savored the load more. Other than that, it was an excellent story.

Excellent story; great story and loved the flow.

Absolutely the best story I have read on here. I hope there is more to come

Very hot story, and unexpected after the first few paragraphs. Great sex, well told and needing a second chapter.

I used to know a guy who was younger than me, shorter and not much to look at when clothed, but just solid muscle underneath, with an amazing, hard and very tight ass. I had to take it slowly but he loved it when I slid my 8 inch cock up inside him.

I use to work at Hardee's restaurant. One of my employees was hung like a bull. We worked the midnight shift and he needed a ride home. One day we went to my place. We both showered and were wiped so we laid down. Next thing I know he was grinding me and I needed that thick member up in me. He took it deep and I shot all over the place. Good times!

Interesting but how do you stock the freezer for the morning?

Very hot story. I hope there's a 2nd chapter🥵

Holy shit this was hot!! I would give anything to have someone ask me to suck them! I have my dreams, now I can wet dreams reading this over and over!

Damn that was hot.

was jerking my cock the whole time

Hot, HOT, story, I hope there is a part two being written!!

DV19

This was a very well written story. It was not just a rush and fuck story; you gave great details and a well developed build up. I really like the fact that Russ showed real concern about Jacky being comfortable with taking his big dick; this was real love ❤️ I also glad you included passionate kissing in your story. For me, kissing is one of the most passionate thing that two people can do. Keep writing ✍️

I've read this story several times and each time it gets better. So very hot!

Great!

Great read. Very sexy and glad you are back.