All Comments on 'A Big, Thick Cock for Monica Pt. 01'

did something as bad as this tripe ever rate more than a 2

This got me hard and I had a big load of cum on the floor. Great story, I want more. In fact I need to suck on a cock and fill my mouth. Cum, Cum, Cum

“imagine this work is being read to you in a sultry female voice” I knew he story was going to be a complete loser. Competent writing doesn’t require stage directions.

It's perfect.

This addiction to big cock and cum made me horny as hell.

This would probably be better in first person, or third person.