All Comments on 'A Birthday Tradition'

by rd75000

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pokeherkingpokeherkingover 3 years ago

Wow two of your stories in a month. Both with your trademark slow build. Slow building a story like this is a tough line to walk, but when done well it is so much better. Hope there is more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Welcome back, your excellent stories have been missed.

Rob_HowardRob_Howardalmost 3 years ago

I know this comment is too late since the publication of this story, but I still wanna comment how brilliant this story is. All the descriptions of Jennifer, her personality, her friends and colleagues and her reputation of being a smart corporate woman, really builds up and pays off at the beginning of action when Jennifer gets her first spanking at the restaurant, while she's first made to pull down her pants in front of all her acquaintances. As a writer, I'm really inspired to have this kind of buildup for my characters from now on. Hope you write more stories.

rayironyrayironyover 2 years ago
genuinely

titillating !

HawkerPennHawkerPennabout 2 years ago

I've read and enjoyed all your stories submitted so far, greatly enjoying each and every one. Thanks so much! I can't wait to read more, so, please write on!

Camguy4funCamguy4fun8 months ago

Terrific story!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good fantasy. A little to long for me, at five pages. At least Jennifer got her revenge on Madison. Hopefully Madison also ends up completely naked as Jennifer did. An other chapter; Madison must strip

naked and gets spanked by the group.

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