by smy3th
.was looking forward this part after the hot part 1. this was more true to life as I found out raising 7 kiddos. the first part was HOT HOT HOT!
Too bad a stranger didn't track her down and avail himself on her charms while she was postin while alone
Much better thatn Part I
Wonder how it would read if both were fused.
A wild alternate ending. Mr. Smyth has done himself up proud as well as tickle the hell out of his reader's funny bones. I loved this story as things went wildly out of control. Loved the telemarketer phone call. Great Read. Lottsa fun!
Pricelessly funny! Woke my sub I was laughing so hard. Keep up the good work!
Very descriptive story, I was laughing very hard at the mental picture you drew, up until the kids came in (not cool!). But I sure would have liked to see the look in the telemarketer's face! Also, I was waiting for the fire department to show up after the smoke alarm went off!