All Comments on 'A Bitch In Heat'

...now I know. How was your trip to Scotland?

Chef

I see you're still being a naughty lady, and what's best is you haven't lost your wicked sense of humor. Ronnie W.

whit a braw story.

did ye get a supersized big mac, hen, and wull ye no come back again? x

Hi Sarah, its been awhile. While im 25% Irish my clan cums from one of the islands betwwen Ireland and Scotland lol. I loved your story, back to your best!!! How have you been?

Aussie Phil

Good story.. good luck

When the cars rockin, Don't come knocking. Seriously like drive in movie where we used to watch couples fuck in car. Steamy windows jackin off like old day some new twists but concept stil the same.

Keep it up Sarah luv ya: Woody

Better than I could do....but not quite up to your best.

It is so good to have you back dear Sarah. So, graduation and Scotland is where you have been? Well, this story was worth the wank...eh....wait. And a good wanking story is was. I look forward to seeing more of...eh...from you.

Pat

I've been waiting for you're next story it's been bluidy months. But you just may be knighted for this one, get an invitation to be the guest of honor at the next parliametary meeting. I hear those guys in the labor party are animals :).

lads and lasses:

a tale from the foot of the highlands.....

none to quick and a goodly tale it is...

M n'H saga deserve a wee spot in the

annuls of Scot literature, right

along side of Sir Walter......i say...

need to get more from this lass!!!

boston bruce

Welcome back, Sarah. I see you were having a lot of fun while you were gone. I loved your story, it was funny but also got me hard as chinese algebra while I read it (as I showed you earlier, lol). I wish I were there to witness your dogging first-hand, because I can't imagine a hotter sight than someone screwing you in public...well, maybe if I were involved. ;)

Suddenly, I long to travel to Scotland and meet the family--yours, mine, or ours. Jack

Oh Sarah, you've done it again! Honey, I loved this story, but no wonder your pussy was all stretched out when you came back home!

Leastways, I can always know, I was your first fuck!! Call me later tonite, and I will be fucking your friend, Leah.

Love always,

Daddy

Now we at least know what you've been upto all this time kiddo. ;-)

Sarah, you've gone and done it again. You've written a really hot story that was fun to read. Promise me that you won't ever stop writing. This is definitely a favorite

oh...gawd,you said the magic words! fucked his ass with a dildo...gotta get mine, now...and "submit" to it. Bet my hard cock won't last long...yummy story!!! Thanks! pity you're not here to plow me good....

Well you did it again. No matter where you go the story is the same Unlimited sex in the wildest ways. I just don't know how you do it, BUT please don't ever stop. As always Sarah you keep everybody waiting to see what is going to happen next.Sort of like peeking around the corner. It's that up and at them, in your face sex that always gets us going. With your fan club you could run for mayor of Pittsburgh and win!!! A really great story and I can't wait to read your next one.On a rating system of floor, wall, or seiling, this goes over the top and reaches the ceiling. Thanks for keeping us happy and hard.!!!! Classicdreamer 55

Sarah,

Once again your story was great. I would love to help you live out any of your stories. All of your stories are great.

James

Danm girl, that was something else. i definitely dig u and ur cousin morag. the story was really hot sarah and u kept me reading to find out what was next to cum. u made me wanna ccum in ur mouth too girl. HOOtt hot hothothot

Gaj

THIS IS WHAT HARD ONS ARE MADE OF! tHANKS A LOT, SO FAR AT 2 TIMES GETTING OFF AND i HAVE ONLY HAD THE STORY FOR 2 HOURS! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!( AND NO i AM NOT YELLING, JUST VERY EXCITED!)

It was a fun story. Thanks, welcome back.

Ahh Sarah, Somehow, I never pictured you as a travel writer, I see it all now, you writing travel tales and historical fiction, hordes of males, and more than a few females, reading them for the sex and inadvertantly learning something as well.. Welcome home and It is a provocative thought, picturing you in Scotland, my "homeland" too..

Psychprof

Once again Sarahhh, You have "risen" to the occasion, or at least I did. I was going to Italy this summer, but you make Scotland sound SOOO GOOOD. I would gladly become a rogger dogger, especially with you and your cousins. Well you made me smile, I just hope I put a little smile on your smile ;))

_RP

Sarah, this, like all your stories is my favorite. You would make any mans dreams come true.

Ohhhh Sarahhh... lovely! What a way with words. I'm sitting here throbbing.. thinking of your lovely lips and tongue doing a Scottish jig on my cock. Paul

I've read several of your other stories but this one is the best. Hot, funny, even educational. Can't wait until dogging comes to my neighborhood! Chip

Loved the story. got me very hard imagining you dogging it.

I thought it was well written and an excellent story. Of course the ultimate test it gave me a hardon that i had to stroke to completion. lol

as always, you captivate and hold my attention from srart to sexy finish. this is my favorite story now. i am irish, and if you ever want to plan a trip to ireland, just let me know darling......mack

Sarah, since I must have led a sheltered life, I have never had the pleasure of dogging anyone. But I do have a mirror in my bedroom, that would serve the purpose. Cum, kneel, bend over, assume the position, and I will. take the opportunity to dog myself. Woof, woof.

As a man with Scot heritage, Frazier, I loved the story. I played rugby for 11 years, but dogging is a sport that you should bring back to the states. Let me know and "I'll be in Pittsburg afore yee!"

Bshell

I loved it!!! you have outdone yourself once again sarah..i do love your incest tales...wish you would do more dad-daughter ones as well..your horny pilot cant wait to read them.

and they love her too.Who wouldn't love and lust for this Scottish lass? The body of an angel and the mind of a Celtic wench. I've known this lass for years and continue to marvel at how she has blossomed. I marvel at those tits too!

Sarah, you've done it again . . . and again, and again . . . So, where do we all sign up to see more of you, and read more of your work?!?

F-

Another fanatastic adventure for the most gorgeous redhead on the net!

My dick stayed hard the entier time!

sarahhh... I told you already.. your to much for me... I love every thing you write... I masterbate to every story you write me... And it feels so good... t/y... Your Last Pic made me shoot really Hard and I was in Heaven... Larry...

I cannot say how much i enjoyed reading your latest story, This one was fun and naughty. You always make group sex/orgies to seem like a everyday thing. I thank you for letting me know when you post!

Sarah, what can I say that hasn't already been said? You are a man's dream!!! A fantasy girl for all men!! If only 50% of the world's women were clones of you, there would be no war!!! We'd all be making love!!!!

Sarah, you are the hottest finest woman I have ever seen on the net, and there are no limits on what I might do to get to taste you just once!!! You are the girl of my dreams honey!!!

Great story, by the way!! Wish I were your cousin!!!

Sarahhh uses humor and great descriptions of fucking to make wonderful stories. I really liked this one.

Gene

As always, A hot story with plenty to rub to. Redheads with pale skin are always a turn-on for me! Thanks for the pic, and i hope to see much more!

Welcome back. We missed reading the stories that turn you on and never turn you off.

Delightful, delicious, back and dishing out more! Smooth skin and plot, Sarah, yovv doon it agin, lass!

Sarah, I loved your story of unbridled sex. This young Sarah, has so much knowledge of the various variations of sexual debauchery. I wonder if she has copyrighted any of the positions and places, that she has dogged in???

Sarahh, you are the sexiest writer onthis site....did iI mention that I'm part Scottish too. Hey maybe we are related........THAT would be great! Keep up these stories!!

bigeasye98

Non stop sex, food, and foolery...our little gurl has graduated! What may we expect from the post graduate work? More research? She will have to push hard to keep this pace, but that is expected! Over the top, again. Where is that second book?

wow sarah...my trip to germany was slightly different than your trip back to the home country. i'm not sure if i could handle two of you, like you and your cousin. but i sure would like to try. you always get the blood flowing to all the right places......keep it up, please.

tz

Sarah, i read "bitch in the heat" i loved it so much so did for "Big O for Britney" , personaly i think you're one of the best on this site, i just wish you focus a bit more on the romantic side, sex is great of course ;-) but emotions are important too for the sex to be perfect.

Keep up the good work ;-)

and i have 2 dogs-i think i need to go to walk them by Sarah's -and i love sheepskin condoms-but you've brought a new life to walking my dogs -look forward to seeing you on a walk :)

Sarah, how do you keep coming (pun intended) up with great stories? I am heading out to the bushes, just wished I was where you are :) cp_d

Another fantastic story from my favorite author. I had to read it again!

Can't wait for the Breastfeeding My Brother story.

As always, hard to get through a story by Sarah. No, wait. That's always hard through a story by Sarah.

Intellectual, funny and sensual. Would you like to meet the folks?

As always Sarah has me rock-hard, wanting more! Sarah's wild imagination could arouse a dead man!

I wish I were her cousin--

Great work again, Sarah!

What do you mean to forget the Corvette? Was it the 400 hp one? But, okay, I'll forget it for now. Sarah, how does one find cousins like you, Hamish and Morag? Dogging sure sounds like a perfect way to end a day after flying across the Atlantic. Where did you get the energy for all seven guys? And you're so sweet, even giving Hamish some prostate attention after all the attention your G-spot got. Such a kind and considerate cousin!

Thanks for writing!

Loved the story, Schatzi. Nice to see the Americans getting a bit of European Culture. When i lived in Berlin, i had a GF who just LOVED giving me head in my car at an Autobahn Reststop. Germans call it Parkplatzsex....if ya google it you will be surprised what hits you get ,-)

keep it up sexy, and thanks for the pic...added it to my gallery of your photos *grin*

Marc, The Mad American

You definitely have the ability to weave a unique and sexy yarn that makes the reader wonder in horny angst what might be next. What's next? SFR

great stuff again dear im sorry if it took me sooo long

I have had a Scottish dick before ; ) The dick I had was HUGE! It made me think all Scottish men were huge, until I read your story...they're just like the rest of the schmucks!!! ; )

Great work!!

Ach Ney to you. Great adventure, getting some foreign dick is always good for European-US relations. I always prefer no Bush myself.

If you ever want to screw another Australian, you've got my number. I'm sure we're related if that helps turn you on.

Ach Ney to you. Great adventure, getting some foreign dick is always good for European-US relations. I always prefer no Bush myself.

If you ever want to screw another Australian, you've got my number. I'm sure we're related if that helps turn you on.

Hi Babe,yet another great story from the pen of No1.

Authoress.you seem to tackle all subjects with the

erotic touch.Keep up the great work.

Nice story Sarah. Would love to see some dogging, and be your cousin. Want to hear more of your stories.

Ahhh Sarahhhhh.. you manage to make the world so hot with your delicious stories, the warmth that is felt is too much to handle.. thank you for your wonderful words!

A fun story with lots of fantasy sex. If the dowdy Scotts were as openly sexual as the dogging referred, they would be over run by colonialist's joining their fun. (I've reserved my plane ticket for next week to investigate for my self.) Sarah is my kind of lady.

Hey there Sarah that was an awesome story. It is ashame we don't have dogging in the state I live in. If we did mmmmmm babe I would be more then happy to suck on your clit and make you cum.

What makes your stories so very delightful is the fact that you are such a hot, sweet slut! If you can write them, you can do them!

And I've read them all. I like the settings in far off places. But, I like the sex and humor even better! Your devoted fan, Duane

Another great story Sarah... As always exciting and I love reading yhem and keeping my hand busy. Keep up the great work!!

How nice of you to use some lube(smile)! Having seen your tits I must agree it might be worth a rectal exam from you for the opportunity to shoot off in your lovely mouth!

Bonaire

Sarah requested a review and who am I to refuse? As usual for Sarahhh of the lovely boob, this story was full of clever repartee and even includes a poem. Unfortunately, except for the plaid strap-on, the second half of the story is a disappointment. The characters oddly loose their Scottish accents, and old clichés (more taste/less filling) turn up. Still, the story is certainly worth more of your time than 99.9% of the other stuff on this site.

Welcome back! Yet another great story! If you want to do some dogging during Football season you could bring your Sweet (Steelers Fan) Ass to Cleveland & visit the DAWG Pound!

After that incredible adventure you should be crowned Queen of Scotland. The only thing missing from this story is Scotch tape to bind your "victims" while you wear the plaid off your fake dick. Very entertaining tale!

Luv ya,

Lucas

Great story (again) Sarah. A true one, huh? Wow! Is

> your next 1 true as well? I hope so. Here's a website you might be interested in: www.mobog.com Maybe see a new and different type of posting from you. Steve

I dont know how one person can say this is your best so far. I think all of your stories are fantastic. Definitely one of the more classy writers on here. I do get to read them twice, once by myself and If I think that it is worthy I have a female friend that comes over and she gets off by listening to me narrate the stories to her while she does her thing to me so she gets the best of two worlds your literature and usually a mouthful from me keep up the good work it is fantastic and please do turn around luv ya Larry

Great story Sarah I missed you I wanna be your long lost cousin

Sarah can still write good, even across the pond in Scotland. Shes also the most fuckable wench in this hemisphere. If shed only realize how much she needs my cock...........

macrolover

I always did want to fuck a real Scott up his arse. I would prefer Sarah however! Funny and hotter than haggis. I give it five scones.

Someone I'd like to see up the braes. ;)

Sarah,

As usual your story is well written, erotic and imaginative. A true bone raiser as it were yet filled with imagery that brings the reader into the story. An example of erotica done by a real writer, not simply word porn.

You know dear, while Rat Trap was quite good, outside of this genre I would like to see you do something really worthy of your (literary) talent.

Jeff

What an excellent depiction of the perfect fellatio! You almost made me cum without even touching me!

Very well done, Sarahhh. I love your writing and your sense of humor. You are one hot lassie! Poor Hamish with the plaid dildo and all (I would prefer for you to use your finger on my rosebud). Anyways, I'll "meat" you at MacDonald's sometime.

You have quite the way with words my dear. Fascinating story although I suspect it is more your libidinous fantasy than fact. Your knowledge of Scotland does appear to be authentic. But you need private lessons (from me) regarding the sex. Yours, Carlton.

dogging is somethign I was already awear of... and I am more wanting in doing so here in the US...

Extreamly yummy story an after thoughts

Tams

dogging is somethign I was already awear of... and I am more wanting in doing so here in the US...

Extreamly yummy story an after thoughts

Tams

Loved it, your writing is getting better and better. Now I will have to go and get some one to take care of this woody for me.

You managed to string together a gang bang, incest, and assfucking and lesbian sex in a well written tale that had me smiling and hard the whole time I was reading, Good show!

Much better story girl, but I'm danish and we taste better LOL.

Just got back from a cruise to cozamel, lots of babes on board, would make alot good stories, PS did this girl in the porthole now that was fun

Don

"Dogging", in my time on this earth I have not heard this term used until our dear Sarah enlightened us once again with her writing. I'd love to follow this young beauty on her worlwide adventures, but for now I must be satisfied with reading about her exploits, and satisfied I am. Thanks for broadening our horizons and temporarily lengthening our members.

Since I am also of Scottish descent, this story had more than the usual effect (intense erection needing immediate attention). The Glasgow and Edinburgh details seemed all correct, and the dialect well done. But, readers, please note how much better a writer our Sarah has become. This was her best. Now excuse me while I attend to an urgent matter.....

This story had me aroused right from the start. I loved the scottish accent too, and really got into the whole scene! For something I've never experienced it seemed amazingly realistic and this made me more aroused.

I hope you write more stories in the future - I'll be sure to read them!

All the best,

I.

Very hot story. The exhibitionism(dogging) part is very very hot, especially with you getting gangbanged. Keep up the great writing Sarah and I'll be excited to read more in the future.

Sarah, Sarah, Sarah...it was a long wait but well well worth it to read this story! You could get Richard Simmons and his tiny little pee pee hard enough to want you to suck him dry! Great vivid descriptions of every sexual act and response...how realistic and arousing! YOU'RE THE BESTEST!!

Glad you're back and am now waiting for your next submission-did I really say "submission", there I go again, getting hard all over again!!!

wish i was the guy . i haven't tried wearing womans wear yet,but will try anything once. it kept me hard all the time .wow!

lightly comical(nice) and stiring .would like mor sexual variety,but if i cum who cares. jack

I loved it, hot, sexy and funny, just brilliant.

Great story and quite the imagination. Do you dream in color? Looking forward to the breast milk. YUM!

I think my fav part was when she took him in the ass. That boy was wanting that for a LONG time. MMM. Glad we got to see his first shot.

Another excellent story from one of the best writers on this site. Thanks, and looking forward to more!

Great story sexy, funny and hard on entertaining you did it again. I think you are the best writer in Literotica. Keep up the good work!

As soon as I get to visit Scotland, I'm going to find that Mickey D's to see if Morag and Hamish are still there. Cute story, Sarahhh! And timely, since this dogging thing is really the "in" thing in the U.K. I've seen movies...

Another great story as usual. I am a fan for life and ready to read all you have!!!!

As I live 20 miles from Loch Lomond I shall keep an eye out for you.

Nice storys - they kept me hard

xxxx