All Comments on 'A Blessing and a Curse Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very hot story and a very enjoyable read. One suggestion is to edit for the spelling of “quiet”.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really hope you continue on with this story soon , it's really good

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The second chapter of a great story. At the end, the author has a note "to be continued". Unfortunately, it never has.

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New to writing erotica or anything for that matter. But working on my first idea which I will post here soon. I'm not a native speaker so I apologize beforehand for any spelling or grammar mistakes. Constructive criticism is welcomed.

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