by tamsynner
Thanks for a great story. It was very well written - articulate, tasteful, and warm. You developed the tension nicely without getting too focused on it and presented a believable fantasy. I could have used a little more attention to the wonders of first homosexual contact, but its absence didn't lessen my enjoyment of the story. Well done! I'd love to hear your voice in the future and hope you keep writing to us.
That was excellent, although I'm pretty sure that you mixed up Mason's name with Aiden on page one. Good job nonetheless
Really great writing! So engrossing I actually forgot to wank, but that's definitely the attribute of a great story. Please keep writing.
Great story..love the Bi activity and openness .. please keep writing.. Thanks
We'll written, strong characters with fully consenting sex between them.
Refreshing not to have to read about abuse of females (and sometimes males)
I gave it 5 - very well done, more like it please.
An interesting intelligent description of a fantasy many of us would love. Intelligent and sexy. Thank you.
This is an incredibly well written story that was totally believe able. Especially since i am from Philly and this is my dream. Thank you and keep going
Oh fuck! Yes, yes, YES!! God this made me cum SO HARD, and it was SO GOOD! And yes, fucking please?
OUTRAGEOUS! All I imagined was that I either wanted to pile on our be in the middle 😊🫨😊
Great story… read first last and last first… no matter it was a great ride! Well written, mature,pleasant and hot hot hot! OKOK I’m spent, I really hope there will be more… WOW!