All Comments on 'A Brave New World Ch. 05'

This is one of those time that I wish I could smack Istvan upside the back of his head head!

Mighty fine writing, my dear! The characters are well developed; typos are minimal, if any. I'm very impressed at what you've done so far (says the former English teacher). Please keep it up!

Q&A, I really like the craftsmanship of your writing. The main plotline is developing at a believable pace. As your characters reveal themselves. And the conversations and internal monologues are believable.

I really like this story. I wish you could continue with it.