All Comments on 'A Brief Moment of Insanity Ch. 04'

Was it really hard to think of two more Bond Villain bases? Or did you just decide six pages was enough? Why one piece to find?

Loved the story,but I am confused by the shift in gears. Like you just had to end it, instead of letting the chapter end itself. And, is that Miranda real? Loki in disguise again? Questions . . .

i liked that it finaly clicked in my head that this is the weapon from Spell, Crook and Handle that was used in the last chapter and all the other aspect like using loki and i felt he had a little more face time from ur other storie when u just kinda menchin him in passing or tinny cut seen loved the work and look forword to more

A truly fascinating chapter, not only 'magically' but also a technologically altered hero! It's like a sci-fi, mythology, vampire, fortune hunter and spy thriller all rolled into one epic story! I definitely look forward to reading more. I again applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's excellent imagination and creative abilities to bring it to your story. As always thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

This is simply a funstory. I have only read one story similar to this one. At heart, I am a romatic who wants to believe in mutually consensual incestuous love. Therefore, a reader of this story can easily ascertain why I find this story interesting.