All Comments on 'A Brief Moment of Insanity Ch. 06'

we could go back to the time when he was saving for uni

I don't know how each chapter can get better than the preceding chapter. Only wish I could give it more than 5 stars.

This is truly an amazing story. I would like to be able to see the workings of the author's mind. Although numerous curves are thrown throught the story, the story is logically constructed. Although the plot and subplots do not seem to merge, they do. The merging is so suttle, that passages of the story require rereading to make the peices fit. It is worth the effort. 5 stars.

A truly epic storyline merging mythology, technology, mind control, magic and of course sex! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.